Viola Kang 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我訂正以下英文文章的文法以及單字用法(10點)

I have a dream job. It is I want to be a Chinese teacher.

Because I am since the childhood like Chinese language.

And when the teacher can also teach a student the truth of the life.

Let the students know a right thing.

I hope to chase my what student teach very polite.

Also hope that the students can also remember me after growing up.

I hope Ihereafter can complete my dream.

When a students all favorite good teacher.

麻煩大家幫我訂正文法

如單字或文法不流暢 可以更改沒關係

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  • 1 0 年前
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    I hope to chase my what student teach very polite.

    中文意思為何?

    2008-10-23 17:53:27 補充:

    I have a dream job (that) is (being) a Chinese teacher,

    because I like(d) Chinese language (since my childhood),

    (and 後面勿再加 when 以本文文意而言是不正確的 ) (being a 此處的教師應屬非指定的) teacher can teach(es) student(s , 所教學生應為多數) the (reality) of (the去除,此life應屬非指定的) life, let the students know (the) right thing(s),

    註:

    1.第一行使用關係代名詞 that 將兩句連結起,可感覺比較簡潔, 當中文老師改以分詞結構being…………, 減少一行內重複使用 I 字。

    2. the truth of life 生活的事實,應是 生活的真實面 the reality of life

    (trying making them become polite persons,

    (I) hope that the students can (also去除,文意已達,似不必此字) remember me after (they grow) up, (and my dream can come true in the future 修改以簡化文字) (as) (a去除,後之學生為複數) students all (favor 動詞, 不可使用favorite,因此字是名詞及形容詞,文法不對) good teacher.

    I have a dream job that is being a Chinese teacher,

    because I liked Chinese language since my childhood,

    and being a teacher can teaches students the reality of life, let the students know the right things, trying making them become polite persons, I hope that the students can remember me after they grow up, and my dream can come true in the future as students all favor good teacher.

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