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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

需要修改的英文信

Hi gorgeous,

嗨 美女

Happy birthday!

生日快樂

Do I have the pleasure to waste your precious time for a two hour long dinner?

不知道我有沒有榮幸浪費你2個小時for a dinner?

I have several things wanna talk to you, and I also wanna give you your “real” present, which I really want to give you by personal.

我有很多話想跟你說 而且我要給你你"真正"的生日禮物which我想要親手拿給你

Give me the answer before I go back to Taiwan ok?

在我回台前給我回復好嗎?

  

我覺得寫得不太好

請各位英文達人幫我修改修改可以嗎?

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what the ...

"real" means the real present, not those piece of crap I send to her with this letter

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btw 'cuz she's a grade 12 student

god knows how many time she left

isn't that called "waste"?

how come both of you delete the "waste" anyway?

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and em... I "am" truly a "weirdo"

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我又rewrite了一次 這次我把waste改掉了= ="

希望各位針對這篇回答

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Hi Gorgeous,

Today is your eighteenth birthday! I hope you are the happiest person in the whole world today. By the way, do I have the pleasure to invite you for dinner when I go come to Taiwan?

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I have so many things on my mind that would love to share with you, and there is something I really want to give you personally. Give me an answer before I come back ok?

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when I come to Taiwan? *

忘記刪掉

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是come back to Taiwan才對

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  • David
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Hi, (My Dear) Gorgeous,

    Happy Birthday! Do I have the honor to take you out for a 2-hour dinner? There are some thoughts in my mind that I wish to tell you over the dinner.

    Besides, I already got you a present and I like to hand it to you in person/by myself.

    Please, please let me know before I leave for Taiwan.

    **********

    Unless she knows you well, or I won't use "真正" " Real"還加引號, kind of sounds like a wierdo.

    2008-10-24 15:24:16 補充:

    Hi Gorgeous,

    Today is your eighteenth birthday! I WISH you are the happiest person in the whole world today. By the way, do I have the pleasure OF INVITING YOU FOR DINNER BEFORE I LEAVE FOR TAIWAN?

    2008-10-24 15:24:33 補充:

    I have so MUCH THOUGHTS on my mind that I would love to share with you, and there is A PRESENT I really want to give you IN PERSON. Give me an answer before I GO, ok?

    參考資料: US 25
  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    Dear Pretty Girl(比較親切or Darling)~

    Happy Birthday!

    Do I have a pleasure to have a dinner with you after I got back?

    I have a lot of things to tell you, and I want to show you the "real" birthday gift, which I want to show you in person.

    would you please give me an answer before I come back to Taiwan, OK?

    Love you,

    妳的名子,

    .................................................................................

    其實你英文不用寫的太複雜

    因為如果用中文的方法寫 會很怪

    所以我用比較口語的方法寫

    希望這樣有幫到你

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