蚊子 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文,急!第三度改,麻煩翻譯+改作!(20點)

What I will be like when I'm fifty.

{可否幫我翻譯中文+英文部分的錯誤改正..謝謝!!}

{記得要完全喔~拜託~這稿我發了第三次..有重新改過內容了..

希望這次可以幫我"改完全"!!}

在高中的時候.因為一次因緣際會下,我愛上了咖啡,從那時候開始,我就有個夢想,我想要開一個屬於我自己的咖啡館,我做了很多的努力,去達成這個心願,包括加入咖啡社學習基本的如何泡咖啡以及去咖啡店實習如何賣咖啡等等.

我想從大學畢業後,我應該會先找一份正職的工作來籌募資金,以便我的咖啡館能在我35歲以前正式開張,

當我50歲的時候,我應該已經是一個成功的咖啡館主人,而且我咖啡館的生意會非常好,由於我的策略性行銷.

Now and then,我的另一半會和我一起introduce our customers the history of every kind of coffee bean, or teach them how to boil a wonderful coffee which with fragrance and good taste , showed on the TV programs or magazines just like those celebrities do. Also, I will donate my obtained part philanthropic institution and mail back for parents. Sometimes, to spend leisure time in afternoon, I will drive everywhere stroll or go climbing and so on.

為了精進自己對於市場趨勢以及改良創新的方向,我也會在睡前看些有關商業的書籍or 瀏覽些國際新聞和時下年輕人的kuso想法等等I guess that I must feel very happiness and satisfied at that time.

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文法好像怪怪的~

有沒有人可以再幫我看看呢??

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    In high school's time. Because under a cause opportune moment, I have fallen in love with the coffee, from starts at that time, I have a dream, I want to open one to belong to my cafe, I have made very many effort, achieves this wish, how including joins the coffee society study basic to soak the coffee as well as to go to the coffee shop to practise how sells the coffee.

    I want after the university graduation, I to be supposed to be able to look for a regular duty the work to raise the fund first, in order to my cafe could in my 35 year old of before was open for business officially,

    when I 50 year-old time, I should already be a successful cafe master, moreover my cafe business could be extremely good, as a result of mine strategical marketing.

    Now and then,I another one half can with my same placeintroduce our customers the history of every kind of coffee bean, or teach them how to boil a wonderful coffee which with fragrance and good taste , showed on the TV programs or magazines just like those celebrities do. Also, I will donate my obtained part philanthropic institution and mail back for parents. Sometimes, to spend leisure time in afternoon, I will drive everywhere stroll or go climbing and so on.

    In order to strive oneself regarding the market tendency as well as the improvement innovation direction front, I also can in rest look at a related commercial a books or browsing international news and the present young people's kuso idea.I guess that I must feel very happiness

    and satisfied at that time.

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