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One day, I have just come back from school. I t has been a long morning that I have came back. When I came back from school, my family and I have just seen new neighbors are trying to put all the things into their new house. It was my new neighbor. When I first seen them, I have just seen their little kids. After all I went back to my house. When I went back, I was doing my homework. Then I have heard that a loud sound from outside. I wasn’t sure what it was about, so I went out. Then I have saw that it was X. At first I was shock, I wasn’t sure is that him or not. But when I ask my brother, he says it is!

Then X went to my house and say hi to us. I was so shock that; I just can’t believe it was him. Finally he introduces us about his daughter. She has two daughters and one wife. Then I have asked if their children are going to my brother’s house or not. Then he said yeah, of course.

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    One day, while coming back home from my school, I saw a family was moving into a new house nearby my home, and my family saw that, too. Such family, one member of which is a little child, was my new neghbor. I had not said hello to them and directly went into my home to accomplish my homework. As doing my work, I was attracted by a loud sound outside my home, so that I went out and check who had made it. Outside my house, I was astonished at one Man, who is seemingly X. I check with my brother and he fed back a positive answer, "yes, it's him". Then, X turned to us and said hello, and I were still falling in great surpirse. Sequently, he intordused one of his daughter to us and told us that his family included his wife and two daughters. Finally, I invited his children to my broghter's house and they just accepted.

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