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英文高手請近...幫我檢查下面文章的文法

Have you ever seemed the meteor shower before? I had an unforgettable experience when I was in Taiwan. One day morning, I saw a news about the meteor shower. I was so excited, because I had never seemed the meteor before. I could not even think about anything in that day. With the coming of night my heart was getting more nervous. I asked one of my best to go with me. After we reach the mountain, there had a lot of people already. The only thing we did is staring at the sky.( After one hour later, the first meteor crossed the sky. And other meteors started falling one after another.) Although we were freezing and tired, we could not move our eyes away from the sky. Now, three years later, I still could not forget the view of that night.

請幫我檢查一下我的文章的文法有無錯誤或是不通順的地方

這很重要 所以麻煩任真的檢查一下

上面我括弧起來的地方

是想要說

一小時候,第一顆流星劃過天際

接著其他的流星開始陸陸續續的落下

不知道我那樣寫對不對

麻煩各位英文高手了

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
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    Have you ever (seen) the meteor shower before? I had an unforgettable experience when I was in Taiwan. One day morning, I saw a (piece of) news about the meteor shower. I was so excited, because I had never (seen meteors) before. I could not even think about anything (on) that day. (When that night came) my heart was getting more nervous. I asked one of my best (friends) to go with me. After we reach(ed) the mountain, there (were) a lot of people already. The only thing we did (was) staring at the sky.( One hour later, the first meteor (streaked across) the sky. And other meteors started falling one after another.) Although we were freezing and tired, we could not move our eyes away from the sky. Now, three years later, I still could not forget the view of that night.

    (okay, not bad)

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