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Due to unsatisfied with after sales service or maintenance quality,

part B has the right to cancel the order of 2 another set of poker table

and maxi touch products.

Answer 1

最佳解答

Due to unsatisfied with after sales service or maintenance quality,

part B has the right to cancel the order of 2 another set of poker table

and maxi touch products.

Owing to the dissatisfaction of after sales or maintenance quality, the party B has the right to cancel the order of another two sets of poker table and maxi touch products.

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Answer 3

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