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各位大大您好: 期盼您能將此文章達到以下訴求: 1.文法正確 2.內容平易 3. 生動詼諧 I belonged to a special class, which accompany me through the past three years. There’s a person who led us to have wonderful school times and encouraged us to take part in various kinds of activities. Although he’s not as handsome as our PE teacher, he... 顯示更多 各位大大您好:
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I belonged to a special class, which accompany me through the past three years. There’s a person who led us to have wonderful school times and encouraged us to take part in various kinds of activities. Although he’s not as handsome as our PE teacher, he really changed our class. Guess who he is, our homeroom teacher.
In fact, I was little bit hate him at first. I still remember that one time he helped me to practice before a speech competition, he asked me to read for him. At the moment I got on the stage, he said that I walk like a naughty leopard, and asked me to repeat the same action again and again. Moreover, in the middle of my speech, he started to have a doze, and couldn’t stop from shaking his head. I was very angry at that time.
With the time goes by, I found that he really paid lots of efforts for our class. My class made improvements day by day under his teaching. He’s always full of pep, and busy dealing with our matters. However, he never complains. Every time we had good grades, he always praised us and shared the honor with us. And, of course, when we lost the contest, he would encourage us. But, actually, most of time he was in bad mood. No matter how, he enjoys being our teacher.
He is enthusiastic in teaching; you can see the handwriting on the blackboard in the picture. He had tried every method to improve our grades, and set high standard with us. Besides studies, he wanted us to skilled in every aspect. For instance, we even had a lot of practice about cooking before the camping trip. Moreover, he put emphasizes on our physical training. And that’s why we always got first prices in ball games. It made us love to join competitions, and have remarkable achievements.
I think that it’s just because his encouragement can we have the bravery to face every challenges. It made us have not only good time but also unforgettable memories. Though I have graduated now, I will appreciate him forever.
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