秋辰 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

可以幫我看看文法和句子有沒有錯嗎?

這是我自己打的 英文程度不太好 請各位幫忙看一下 有一些不通順或用了句子比較好的 可以告訴我嗎?謝謝幫忙

This summer vacation I went to Seattle for study English. It’s a amazing experience, because many my first try there,.

I took bus alone to Taipei, only use a piece of map that I took form tourism department, I found the Consular Section even I never take MRT.

Spend two hours lined up because a lot of people they want to go abroad on summer , when they check my picture the found my apply photo is the same of my passport, so I need to relined and spend two times price for my new photo. The officer were the foreigner who I first time have spoken!

Before I went to Seattle , I never tried to study English hard, I just have foreign dream, so my English is really bad . When I get off airplane I don’t know what should I do. I just shadow the guy who in front me, when the officer check my passport and said “How are you doing” I answer him “for study” and the officer use strange face to me and said “just said fine is ok” that time I really want to run away, why I have confidence to go abroad ?

Because I want to practice English , I applied double room , when I move in the room , my Korean roommate talked a lot with me . If I don’t know what she said or some words I need to use , I always said “wait a minute” and use my electronic dictionary to search the word , because of this my roommate make a nick name for me “Miss wait”.

When I at school we always need to introduce our name to each other , first meet I said “my name is Chulen” and the guy will be confuse and ask me “Is your name Children?” and second meet they already forgot my name , it’s let me so embarrassed , because this name is made by myself . I want have some connect with my Chinese name , but nobody think it is a English name maybe “Mary” is more suitable to me.

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
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    This summer vacation I went to Seattle for English study. It was an amazing experience, because many my first try there. (sorry don't understand that at all)

    Using only a map that I picked up from the tourist centre, I managed to travel to Taipei on the bus by myself, and was able to find the Consular Section even though I have never taken the MRT before.

    (then there is the part where I don't understand again)

    At the airport, I have spent two hours waiting in a queue, because a lot of people wanted to go abroad during the summer vacation.

    Before I went to Seattle, I never tried hard to study English, I can never concentrate in class, so my English is really bad. When I got off the aeroplane, I had no idea what I should do; I just followed the guy in front of me. When the officer checked my passport and said ‘how are you doing?’ I answered him ‘for study’. Then the officer looked at me strangely and said ‘just said fine is ok’; I really felt like running away, and want to ask myself “why I have the confidence to go abroad?’

    I applied for a double room, so I can have a roommate to practice English with. She was a Korean lady, and we had many conversations. Every time I came across something that I didn’t understand or words that I didn’t know, I would always say ‘wait a minute’ and use my electronic dictionary to search for the word. She gave me the nick name ‘Miss Wait’ because of this.

    When I started at school, we always need to introduce ourselves to each other. My introduction would be ‘my name is Chulen’. However, most people seem to get confused and ask me ‘is your name Children?’ and they would have forgotten my name by the second meeting. It is so embarrassing as this is the English name I gave myself, as I wanted my English name to have some connection with my Chinese name. However, no one thinks that it is an English name, maybe I should have called myself Mary instead.

  • 1 0 年前

    This summer vacation I went to Seattle for English study. It’s an amazing experience, because many my first try there,.

    I took bus alone to Taipei, only used a piece of map that I took from tourism department, I found the Consular Section even I never took MRT.

    I spent two hours to line up because a lot of people want to go abroad on summer.

    When they checked my picture and found that my application photo was the same as that of my passport, so I need to line up again and spent two times of price for my new photo. The officer was the foreigner whom I had spoken with for the first time.

    Before I went to Seattle, I never tried to study English hard, I just had dream about going abroad, while my English was really poor. When I got off the airplane I didn’t know what I should do. I just followed the guy who stood in front of me, when the officer checked my passport and said “How are you doing” I answered him that “for study” and the officer took a strange look at me and said “just say fine is ok”. At that time I really want to run away, why I had confidence to go abroad ?

    Because I want to practice English, I applied for double room, when I moved into

    the room, my Korean roommate talked a lot with me . If I didn’t know what she said or some words I need to use , I always said “wait a minute” and used my electronic dictionary to search for the word , because of this, my roommate made a nick name for me “Miss Wait ”.

    When at school , we always need to introduce our name to each other. For the first meet I said “my name is Chulen” and the guy will be confused and ask me “Is your name Children?”, and for the second meet they already forgot my name , it let me so embarrassed , Since this name is chose by myself . I want to have some connection with my Chinese name, but no body think it is a English name maybe “Mary” is more suitable for me.

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