Alva 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

expatriate career planning翻譯 急

如果組織提供詳盡的駐外人員職涯發展計畫 員工會有更高的意願擔任駐外人員

Employees show higher inclination to work abroad if an organization offers and plans the expatriate career path clearly.

換句話說 駐外人員會投注更多的時間心力 如果組織提供駐外人員完善的且詳盡的職涯規劃

In other words is expatriate will donate more times and efforts in organization assignments if the prospects of expatriate career plan is more distinct.

因此 組織若是對於駐外人員有完善的生涯規畫 不僅僅會增加員工派駐海外的工作意願 也會增加駐外人員回任後的工作投入

Therefore, with a proper career plan for expatriate, the rate of aspiration to work abroad will increase and will motivate their commitment since they return.

麻煩大大幫我看一下這三句話的 "英文"部分 對不對!

不對的地方麻煩幫我修正一下!!

感謝!!

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  • Elisa
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Highlighted in yellow are my corrections to your grammar. Sentences in blue are written for better flaw and word usage.

    如果組織提供詳盡的駐外人員職涯發展計畫 員工會有更高的意願擔任駐外人員

    Employees show higher inclination to work abroad if an organization offers and plans the career path for expatriates clearly.

    Or,

    Employees are more inclined to work abroad for organizations with a clear career path for expatriates.

    換句話說 駐外人員會投注更多的時間心力 如果組織提供駐外人員完善的且詳盡的職涯規劃

    In other words, is expatriates will devote more time and effort to overseas assignments if the prospect of a career plan for expatriates is more distinct.

    => In other words – adverbial phrase. It is not a noun, so you cannot use a verb right after that.

    Time, effort – uncountable nouns

    Prospect – use singular noun and singular verb.

    Or,

    In other words, expatriates will devote more time and effort to assignments if there is a coherent career plan for expatriates.

    因此 組織若是對於駐外人員有完善的生涯規畫 不僅僅會增加員工派駐海外的工作意願 也會增加駐外人員回任後的工作投入

    Therefore, with a proper career plan for expatriates, the rate of aspiration for the expatriates to work abroad will increase and they will renew their commitment to work as they return.

    Or,

    Therefore, with a well-defined career plan, the likelihood for the expatriates to work abroad will be more favorable, so as their commitment to work as they return.

    參考資料: Myself. Went abroad at age 11. With 32 years experience speaking and writing English. Tutored English as an Undergrad. A project manager in the US since 1992.
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