屎恩 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請各位英文高手幫我檢查我的文法?

請各位英文高手幫我檢查我的文法?

I like boxing sport, it needs the accurate judgement and gotta pay the

high attention on it.When I was in tne game, the most challenge is not

the opponent but myself.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    (你的)

    I like boxing sport, it needs the accurate judgement and gotta pay the

    high attention on it.

    *(gotta不是一個真正的詞,那是一個我們口語的說法,就像wanna 也不是, wanna= want to 但那只是我們的講法而已)

    我改的

    I like the sport boxing, it needs the accurate judgement and you have to pay alot of attention while playing.

    (你的)

    When I was in tne game, the most challenge is not the opponent but myself.

    *你前面是現在式,所以後面也要是現在式)

    我改的

    When I'm in the game, the most challenging thing is not the opponent but myself.

    完整的

    I like the sport boxing, it needs the accurate judgement and you have to pay alot of attention while playing.When I'm in the game, the most challenging thing is not the opponent but myself.

    2008-12-23 02:54:20 補充:

    (你的)

    When I was in tne game, the most challenge is not the opponent but myself.

    *(你前面是現在式,所以後面也要是現在式)

    tne----the

    希望能幫到你喔~

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  • I like boxing「X」.

    It needs the 「right」 judgement and 「you have」 got to pay the

    high attention on it.

    When I was in 「the」 game, the most challenge is not

    the opponent but myself.

    2008-12-23 21:11:02 補充:

    我認為這樣較好唸

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