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搭便車hitch a ride

Hitch a ride, sound like exciting and interesting. This was I never been thought. But I thought this worth trying and risk to thing. Luckily, I joined activities so I have this experience opportunity.

We have six teams competition together. Started the activity we were rode bicycle in Tainan form 玉井. Totally was road about 50 kilometers. In this process of ride bicycle, we have mission was took picture some place. Our team members rode bicycle very smoothly that it is nothing accident. I just felt the weather was very hot. In the afternoon we arrived at the destination. Everyone took break and ate lunch. But we returned to Tainan. We need to hitch a ride. It’s very exciting. We only three hours have to finish this mission. Everyone stand at the road side. That time, I think very hard to hitch a ride. Because everyone had a bicycle, we only needed to truck. One hour past. We only stand the rod side. We still insisted that we try to hard wave the car. At last, one truck was stop. We explained our intention then he agreed to pick up us. We were very happy. We only took a ride the truck to 永康. So we hitch a ride of second time. Team members have confidence this time that it smoothly hitch a ride. Finally, we were third of arriving at destination.

In this process, I was afraid of not success in this challenge. Then we cooperate to finish this mission. Teamwork was very important in the team that it is great experience. The meaning of challenge, I learned it was not limited our mind and have to break it. I thought it was very worth doing hitch a ride in the life.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    Hitch a ride, [does] it sound exciting and interesting[?] This was [what] I never thought [about doing]. But I thought [it is] worth trying and [taking a risk]. Luckily, I [was able to experience this great opportunity.]

    We [had a toatal of] six teams in [this] competition . [We started the trip by riding bicycles at 玉井, Tainan.] [The total mileage is] about 50 kilometers. In this [competition], [our] mission was [to take] pictures of some places. Our team members [began the trip smoothly]. I just felt the weather was very hot. In the afternoon we arrived at the destination. Everyone took break and ate lunch. But when we returned to Tainan[,] we need to hitch a ride. It's very exciting. We only [have] three hours have to finish this mission. Everyone [stood] at the [sidewalk]. I [thought it is very hard to hitch a ride at that time], because everyone had a bicycle on hold. We [needed a truck that is able to transport us and our bicycles.] One hour [had past by], we [are still standing] on the [sidewalk]. We [tried very hard at waving to the cars in order to get some attention]. At last, one truck [had] stop. We explained our intention [to him]. [Fortunately,] he agreed [to give us a ride]. [Everyone was thankful.] [However, the truck stopped at 永康.] So we have to hitch a ride for the second time. [Everyone had the confidence that] this time [it will be easier]. Finally, we were [the third team to arrive at the destination.]

    In this experience, I was afraid of [failing.] [But as a team, we cooperated to finish this mission] Teamwork was very important. [I learned that challenge means not to limit our minds but to [overcome it]. I thought [hitch-hike is worth a try once in a lifetime.]

    2008-12-25 12:58:00 補充:

    hitch a ride 改成hitch-hike 比較順歐!

    參考資料: Myself 希望有幫忙到你
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  • 1 0 年前

    謝謝幫我修改文法的人~>"<太感謝了~辛苦了

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    to 活一天: 這連1/4篇essay的長度都比不上...不算長吧= =

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  • 羅晉
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    文章也太多了吧!!要指出那麼多錯誤,難事

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