小蘅 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

有誰可以幫我看文法哪裡有錯??

痾..

就是我英文班大考老師說要準備一小篇演講

文章我想好了

但是文法應該會錯一大堆

有誰可以幫我抓一下哪裡有文法錯誤,幫我改一下

謝謝....

Well,I think smoking is really unhealthy things.

Now many people are smoking,but they will not

think of them health.My father will also smoke.

He had stopped smoking the cigarrette the period

of time,but it has been defeated.Afterward he continued

to smoke.Obviously stop smoking is a difficult matter.

I think most should not smoke is the pregnant woman,

because there is a life in her belly.If she smoke,it's epual

to harm her baby.Also,it is easily to get lung cancer if

you smoke.So,we should say "no" to the cigarette.On the

one hand treasures own body,on the other hand respects

other people.

請英文達人幫我看看文法哪裡有錯吧!!

感激不盡.....

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Well,I think smoking is a unhealthy thing to do.

    Nowadays many people are smoking regularly, but they don't often

    think about their health conditions and the consequences. My father

    also smokes.He had stopped smoking for a short period of time, but

    he was defeated by the desire to smoke. Afterwards, he continued

    to smoke. It is obvious that stop smoking is a difficult task to

    accomplish. I think most people should not smoke, especially

    pregnant women, because it can lead to miscarriage of the baby and

    even defections. If the women smoke while they are pregnant, it is

    epually as harm to themselves as to the baby. Also smokers can get

    lung cancer easily due to the hydrocarbons content in cigarettes.

    We should say "NO" to cigarettes not only for our own health but

    also for the health of others.

  • eleven
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    看得出您已學好一陣子,請先自己檢查時態有哪些地方不合理,不然永遠學不到東西的!

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