a rose for Emily大意(請幫中翻英)
- 1 0 年前最佳解答
The prolog to the death of Emily's dad who had wealth and fame, it is in eccentricity people feel. The tax inspector, who dares not tax her at first, asks her for paying. To make a living, Emily must teach kids music and she falls in love with a man, who does not love her. Oddly enough, Emily rarely goes out. Ten years later, everyone have been curious about her great house. After her death, villagers enter into her house with attention, finding there has be a long-death bones--terrifying-- lying in the edge of her bed.
2009-01-15 00:27:41 補充：
所以改為The prolog to the death of Emily's dad who 「has」 wealth and fame
(寫文學作品的內容大意時，時態都要用現在式!)參考資料： 自己, 自己
- ElisaLv 71 0 年前
You have some grammar errors around verb usage.
These are the corrections:
The prolog of the death of Emily's famous and wealthy dad starts with an extraordinary atmosphere.
The tax inspector, who dares not tax her at first, asks her to pay.
2009-01-24 14:47:22 補充：
Ten years later, everyone starts to get curious about her great house.
After her death, villagers enter into her house with curiosity, finding there a terrifying skeleton lying on the edge of her bed.
** If it became a skeleton, the person was long dead.