奶森 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫我校正一篇設計文章的英文~20點呦

如題,以下是我作業需要寫的說明文,中英文都是我自己寫的~希望請英文高手幫我看一下英文部分,意思對即可,謝謝!

此Netbook的設計試著將書還原成最原始的狀態

在古代中國,人們使用繩子把紙張捆成一捆以便攜帶

因此成了LCD cover上面的十字溝槽

此外, Body master亦參考中國讀書用的桌子,以反曲線組成

在此設計上可見東方的元素,為此現代資訊產品賦予不同的文化內涵。

The idea of this netbook design is inspired by the original status of

books. In ancient China, people used ropes to bind paper for easy

carrying, the image develops the cross ditches on the LCD cover.

In addition, the form of body master refers Chinese desk, which

consists of reciprocal curves. The design is applied to oriental

elements, it implements particular cultural connotation for this

modern product.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    大致來說翻的還不錯,只是有幾個地方不太順。

    此Netbook的設計試著將書還原成最原始的狀態

    The idea of this netbook design is inspired by the most original form o fbooks.

    在古代中國,人們使用繩子把紙張捆成一捆以便攜帶

    In ancient China, people used ropes to bind paper for easy

    carrying.

    因此成了LCD cover上面的十字溝槽

    Such image was developed into the cross ditches on the LCD cover.

    此外, Body master亦參考中國讀書用的桌子,以反曲線組成

    In addition, the form of body master refers to traditional Chinese desk, which consists of reciprocal curves.

    在此設計上可見東方的元素,為此現代資訊產品賦予不同的文化內涵。

    The oriental elements are incorporated in the design. It implements particular cultural connotation for this modern product.

    大致上只是小改,不過因為沒辦法high light所以可能要仔細比較一下才看得出來那邊不一樣。

    以上僅供參考,請多指教。

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