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英文文章,麻煩幫我修改一下~

最近在加強英文能力,由於之前英文能力實在太差了,幾乎等於零。發現寫跟說的能力很弱~所以就儘量逼自己寫些文章,麻煩幫我修改跟說明一下。

怕大家看不懂所以附上中文內容...

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Everyone has two senses of rational & sensibility.

There are two words - "rational & sensibility", that mean about one's behavior.

Rational indicate that one's behavior has clear, logic & reason, which such as a scientist.

Scientists' job that have found out intrinsic of everything.

They will need to experiment with publish theory.

So that is rational which be covered about methods to produce results.

However time need to spare, scientists always do the best of their ability to find the answers.

In the other hand, sensibility is total different than former.

That total lack of any principles, no think, no logic, no reason.

Just like somebody do something depend on oneself's instinct.

No matter humans do anything might will be silly, because they have no any plans.

But in a way, sensibility actually can helped people to get a success.

In fect, the famous scientists get accurately instinct before they achieve distinction worldwide.

The instinct took them to find the answers that contribute to human civilization.

I think scentists that the grandest job in the world.

Do you also think so about that?

每個人都有兩種思維:理性與感性。

這裡提到兩個字-"理性與感性"是關於一個人的行為。

理性表示一個人的行為是清醒的,有邏輯、理由的,就像科學家一樣。

科學家的工作就是找出事物的本質。

他們需要經過實驗來提出理論。

所以理性是包含條理所產生出來的結果。

無論需要騰出多少時間,科學家總是盡力去找出答案。

另一方面,感性就完全和前者不同了。

那是毫無原則的,沒有思考、邏輯、理由。

就像做事依靠自己的直覺。

無論人們做任何事都可能會是愚蠢的,因為他們沒有計畫。

但某種程度來說,感性實際上卻可以幫助人們成功。

事實上,許多世界各地知名的科學家在得到榮耀前都有準確的直覺。

就是這直覺帶領他們去發現對人類文明有貢獻的答案。

我想科學家應該是這世界上最高貴的職業吧!

你是否也這樣想呢?

已更新項目:

可以的話,麻煩補充一下說明為何要這樣修改~~

這樣對我學習上比較有幫助,Thanks!

2 個已更新項目:

1. These are two words "rational & sensibility" that describe one's behavior

describe 跟 mean 比較起來意思應該差不多,那為什麼要用describe較合適??

2. Thist is rational, which needs to be covered with methods to produce results.

這句你回答??? 我想知道是否可以這樣寫,還有cover當包含使用後面接with?

3 個已更新項目:

3. Whatever the amount of time it take & However time needs to spare

你們兩位這兩句的修改不太相同,請問有什麼差別,哪一句比較好??

4. On the othe hand, sensibility is totally different from rationality.

emily的回答仍然是用than,至於為什麼要用from??比較級的句型可以這樣使用??

4 個已更新項目:

5. Humans don't plan before they do things.This is why anything that they do, could be silly.

這句我比較偏向強調是「人類做任何事可能都是"愚蠢的",因為"沒有計畫"

是否可以改成:This is why anything human to do that could be silly. Because they have no any plans.

不用might的原因是因為假設語氣用could較為肯定嗎??

5 個已更新項目:

6. In fact, the most famous scientists get accurately instinct before they achieve distinction worldwide.

這句我是要強調世界上著名的科學家,最高級可以是多數嗎??還是只能是單一個體??

7. I think scientists have the gradest job in the world.

這句為什麼要用have呢??

6 個已更新項目:

8. 「做任何事可能都是"愚蠢的",因為"沒有計畫"」是憑著直覺做事,只是銜接上下文所以沒有把全句說的很詳細。

是否可以寫This is why anything human to do that could be silly. Because they have no any plans.

因為上句已經說了It is the lack of any principles, no thinking, no logic, no reasoning, like doing something only depend on one's instinct.

7 個已更新項目:

9. However 跟 Whatever 有什麼樣的差別呢?可否更明確的說明。我知道這兩個字意思很接近,但後面的應用方式不太相同...

10. 最後「I think the job of scientists is the noblest in the world.」我是要強調科學家的尊貴,那是否用noblest會較恰當?

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Everyone has two senses- rationality & sensibility

    These are two words that describe one's behavior

    Rationality indicates that one's behavior is clear and logcal such as a scientist

    Scientist's job invovles finding answers to everything

    They will need to experiement with theory

    ???

    Whatever the amount of time it take, scientist always do their best to find answers

    On the othe hand, sensibility is totally different from rationality

    It lacks any principle, logic and reason

    Doing somthing depend's on one's instinct

    Since there is not any plans, what is done is silly

    But in some situations, sensibility can actually help people succeed

    In fact, famous scientists had instinct on their discovery before they achieve distinctions

    That instinct gave them the answers that contribute to human civilization

    I think scientists have the gradest job in the world

    Do you think so too?

    2009-02-03 05:26:16 補充:

    emily 某些句子 翻的比我仔細, 可以參考看看

    至於你說我為什麼會這樣翻, 其實也就把你寫的英文稍微修改一下, 文法的部分, 用詞 , 拼字 等等 ...

    如果對哪個 句子 不曉得我為什麼會這樣翻的話,告訴我, 我這樣回答比較容易

    2009-02-08 21:05:19 補充:

    我認為從中文翻英文困難的地方在有的時候中文表達的方式跟英文不一樣, 所以要一字不漏把中文翻成英文反而文不達意. 我會盡量翻譯你的’意思’ 而不是 翻譯你的中文內容

    1. Describe 跟 mean 的意思不太一樣的… behaviour 是行為, 所以是’描述’ (describe) 行為, 而不是 ‘意思’ (mean) 行為. ‘mean’ 用於表達思緒,邏輯等等. 例: I mean you no hard (我沒有傷害你的意思)

    2009-02-08 21:05:42 補充:

    2. 這句我看不懂你說的’包含條理’是什麼意思. 我會這樣翻 ‘So rationality is the product of 包含條理’ … 問題出在’包含’, 我感覺Cover 並不是一個正確表達你所要表達的字.

    3. 綜合一下…. However long it may take 或是 Whatever it may take我覺得適當

    4. 我說不出來than 跟from 差異在哪裡,根據我的經驗(長年居住國外), from 聽起來比較順耳

    5. 如果不考慮這句話的邏輯性的話 (沒有計畫, 便代表作的事情可能是愚蠢的? 那有計畫, 便代表不愚蠢?)

    2009-02-08 21:05:59 補充:

    照你的意思 Without a plan, anything that people do could be potentially silly

    -Could 是比might較為肯定, might 50/50, could 30/70 (個人感覺)

    6. 可以多數. Most well known 或 well respected比 famous 貼切… famous (有名), well known 或 well respected (著名)

    2009-02-08 21:06:07 補充:

    7. 這也是英文表達跟中文不一樣的地方, 一般用的是 have

    如果用 ‘is’ 的話, 要寫 I think being a scientist is the greatest job in the world

    翻譯最難的地方不是懂中文或是懂英文 , 而是了解作者要表達的’意思’… 照’意思’ 去翻 而不是 照 ‘文字’ 去翻才能翻的好… 這要靠多接觸, 多了解 跟多練習

    2009-02-08 21:08:33 補充:

    更正

    1. 不是 'hard' 而是 'harm'

    5. 不是 could be potentially silly 而是 could potentially be silly

    參考資料: me, me again, me again, me again, me again, me again, me again
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  • 1 0 年前

    Everyone has two senses of rational & sensibility.

    These two words - "rational & sensibility", describes one's behavior.

    Rational indicate that one's behavior is clear, logic & reasoning, like a scientist.

    Scientists' job is to find out the intrinsic of everything.

    They will need to experiment then publish theory.

    Thist is rational, which needs to be covered with methods to produce results.

    However time needs to spare, scientists always do the best of their ability to find the answers.

    On the other hand, sensibility is different than rational. It is the lack of any principles, no thinking, no logic, no reasoning.

    It's like doing something only depend on one's instinct.

    Humans don't plan before they do things.this is why anything that they do, could be silly.

    But in a way, sensibility actually can helped people to successed.

    In fact, the most famous scientists get accurately instinct before they achieve distinction worldwide.

    The instinct helped them to find the answers that contribute to human civilization.

    I think the job of ascentists is the greatest job in the world.

    Don't you think so too?

    參考資料: me
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