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"Supportive" is one of my positive qualities. I like to help people, especial when they encounter problems and can't resolve by themselves. So, what I can do is try my best to assist them. Every time, after helping them solve the problems, I feel happy.

So, if you are still the person who always think of yourself, please try to help people, and then you'll find a new situation.

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  • 寶寶
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    1 0 年前
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    "Supportive" is one of my positive qualities.

    改成Supportive is one of my positive qualities

    除非你是代表其他特殊俚語用法如”awesome”或”dude”之類的

    否則不用加””

    I like to help people, especial when they encounter problems and can't resolve by themselves.

    改成 ... , especially when they are encountering problems and can’t ...

    So, what I can do is try my best to assist them.

    改成 Therefore, what I can do is trying my best to assist them.

    Be動詞後要加V-ing

    Every time, after helping them solve the problems, I feel happy.

    改成I feel happy every time after I help them solving their problems

    這樣比較順

    So, if you are still the person who always think of yourself

    改成So, if you are still the person who only thinks about yourself

    please try to help people

    改成please trying to help other people

    , and then you'll find a new situation.

    這句我看不懂...

    2009-02-10 14:10:36 補充:

    其實你英文很好喔!

    建議你在往下讀更艱澀的文法之前

    先回去再讀一次 "五大句型"

    你會發現那對你很有幫助的!

    因為不管再難的句子都依定要遵守五大句型的規則的

    參考資料: me
  • 1 0 年前

    倒數第二行的

    So, if you are still a person who always thinks only of yourself...

    其他應該都沒錯了

    2009-02-10 12:40:05 補充:

    還有第一行的

    I like to help people, especially when they encounter problems and can't resolve by themselves...

    就這樣

    參考資料: 自己
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