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請幫我修正我的英文心得

我的英文並不好,這是第一次打英文心得

文法還有單字都沒有認識很多

請懂英文的人幫我修正一下!!!

一句英文一句中文 以便表達我想講的!

The Nightmare before Christmas(聖誕夜驚魂)

The Nightmare before Christmas is my favorite animations and it's directed by the famous director Tim Burton.

聖誕夜驚魂是我最喜歡的動畫卡通片,而導演是Tim Burton

The Nightmare before Christmas also is a first book in english I have ever read.

聖誕夜驚魂也是我第一本閱讀的英文讀物

My favorite role is sally who is the prima donna in this book.

這本書裡面我最喜歡的角色是女主角Sally

Because she did many thing and no matter what it takes,for her lover,Jack.

因為她不顧一切為了Jack做了許多事情

All people have their dream worlds and of course they are different.

所有人都擁有自己的夢想,當然每個人的夢想都不一樣

We'd like to open our dream world to other people.

我們喜歡打開自己的夢想分享給其他人

And Jack is a skeleton who live in Halloweentown.

Jack是住在萬聖節鎮上的骨頭

Every year on Octor 31 jack always sang his scary songs and danced his dangerous dances and scare people.

每年的10月31號Jack總是會唱著可怕的歌曲和跳著危險的舞蹈去嚇人

They were afraid.人們都很害怕

But year by year Jack was bored with Hallonween and he want to be a santa claus.

但是年復一年過去Jack已經厭倦了萬聖節,而想當一個聖誕老人

Being a santa claus and Driving the sleigh across the sky,give a lot of presents to every children is Jack's dream.

當一個聖誕老人且騎著雪橇在天上飛、發送禮物給每個小孩是Jack的夢想

He loves christmas tree,beautiful decorations on it.

他喜歡聖誕樹和裝是在聖誕樹上的裝飾物

And he really did it.最後他做到了

Although it was a big mistake in the end.

雖然結果是一個大錯誤

But this book still has a happy ending.

但是這本書還是有一個快樂的結局

There are some bad guys like Oogis boogie,three trick and treaters in story is so bad.

這本書裡頭也有一些壞腳色,像是Oogis boogie和three trick and treaters

But I think story is more funny because of them.

但是我認為有因為他們的關係讓故事變得更有趣!

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    The Nightmare before Christmas is my favorite animation and it's directed by the famous director Tim Burton.

    The Nightmare before Christmas also is the first book in English I have ever read.

    My favorite role is Sally who is the prima donna in this book.

    Because she did many things for her lover,Jack, no matter what it takes.

    Everyone has his own dream and of course it differs among different people.

    We like to open our dreams and share them with others.

    Jack is a human skeleton who lived in Halloweentown.

    In every October 31 Jack always sang his scary songs and danced his dangerous dances to scare people.

    People were afraid.

    But year after year Jack was bored with Hallonween and he wanted to be a santa claus.

    Being a santa claus, driving the sleigh across the sky, and giving a lot of gifts to every children was Jack's dream.

    He loves Christmas trees and the beautiful decorations on it.

    Eventually, he really did it.

    Although it was a big mistake in the end, this book still has a happy ending.

    There are still some bad guys like Oogis boogie,three trick and treaters.

    But I think these bad guys make the story more interesting!

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