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請英文專家看一句英文句子,可以幫忙修正嗎?

請英文專家看一句英文句子,可以幫忙修正嗎?

你會不會覺得我反應遲鈍,過了這麼多個月,才領悟這個道理。

Hope you won't take me for a person so blunt as to realize this principle after several months.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    To: George

    ...after all those things happened for several months (X)

    happen是瞬間動詞, 是不可直接與一段期間連用的.

    建議: ....several months after those things happened. (O)

    提供參考.

    2009-02-28 22:22:34 補充:

    你會不會覺得我反應遲鈍,過了這麼多個月,才領悟這個道理。

    Hope you won't take me for a person so blunt as to realize this principle after several months.

    - 中文是個問句, 何以英文變成直述句?

    - a person so blunt as 改為such a blunt person as 或so blunt as較順.

    - 不定詞to realize配上after several months, 可能被誤解為未來的數月以後才領悟; 應把花費數月調前才順.

    - principle是"原則;原理", 而本句應以"因果;玄妙"的logic之含意較為適合.

    建議修改為:

    Won't you deem me such a laggard as having spent so many months to figure out its logic?

    Won't you deem me so tardy as having to take so many months to figure out its logic?

    註1: deem也可替換為regard, take, consider等.

    註2: 用Won't you起首而不用Will you起首來發問, 表示發問者有某種程度的主觀否定, 意為「你該不會....吧?」

    註3: laggard與tardy請查字典即知很符合中文原句語意.

    參考資料: 自己的翻譯經驗; 英文文法
  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前

    你會不會覺得我反應遲鈍,過了這麼多個月,才領悟這個道理。

    Hope you won't take me for a person so blunt as to realize this principle after several months.

    >> Will you consider me a slow learner yet to realize the principle after all those things happened for several months? or

    Will you consider me sluggish as yet to realize the principle after all those things happened for several months?

    反應遲鈍: 剛好想到 slow learner on sth. 這個詞, 就是在某方面反應比較慢, 比較遲鈍之意; sluggish 也有反應遲鈍之意

  • 1 0 年前

    I hope you don't feel that I am blunt because I take a month of time to understand this principle.

    2009-02-28 19:18:28 補充:

    那麼多月 我剛才發現= =

    那請改成

    I hope you don't feel that I am blunt because I take months of time to understand this principle.

    其實英文不用說那麼複雜 外國人最喜歡simple sentence

    2009-03-01 03:02:27 補充:

    So many?

    應該是too many吧

    今天早上起床才發現前面問的是疑問句XDDDDDD

    半夜還是別亂答問題好了~囧

    參考資料: Me, 我
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