Jacky 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文句型有點問題幫忙修改

我的文章截錄如下,文法好像有錯,請幫忙修正,謝謝!

On my bedroom's shelf sits a toy panda.

I give it a name Wanwan.(文法有誤)

Wanwan has small,triangular plastic noise.(small和triangular的形容詞順序)

We are like best friends when I am unhappy and sad. (文法對但語法怪怪的)

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    There is a panda toy sitting on my bedroom's shelf.

    I give it a name, Wannwan.

    Wanwan has a small triangular plastic noise.

    We are just like the best friends as I am unhappy and sad.

    最後一句,為甚麼在你不快樂的時候,你們是好朋友呢?

    這句話怪怪的耶...可以多作說明嗎

    你可以寫...

    在我難過不高興時,他安撫了我的心靈,所以我們是好朋友。

    We are like the best friends because Wanwan appeases my spirit when I am unhappy and sad.

    參考資料: my brain
  • 1 0 年前

    I name it Wanwan.

    Wan wan's nose is cute made of plastic, of which shape is triangular.

    We are kind of best friends that could share feelings, especially when I am unhappy and sad!

    參考一下囉!

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