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這是FOR小朋友母親節敘述媽媽的!!再麻煩大家幫我看內如是否需要修改,或是哪文法錯誤,謝謝!!

(1)我的媽媽頭髮長長的,眼睛有擦睫毛膏所以閃閃亮亮的,但是嘴巴都沒有擦口紅‧皮膚白白的,臉也會擦腮紅‧我覺得媽媽擦眼影及穿裙子時最漂亮的‧另外,我最喜歡媽媽的手,因為摸起來軟軟的很舒服,媽媽很會煮菜,尤其是酸辣湯,一點都不辣喔!媽媽平常都要工作很辛苦,所以我都會幫忙媽媽‧我最希望的是媽媽永遠留在我身邊,因為我最愛的就是媽媽‧

My Mom has long straight hairs. Her eyes are shining because she mascaras her eyes, but her mouse is without lipstick. Her skin is white and with blush on her face. I feel that my Mom is the most beautiful when she wears a skirt and wipes the eye’s shadow. Beside, I like my Mom’s hand mostly because they are so soft. My Mom is good at cook especially Sour and Hot Soup and it’s not spicy at all. My Mom works very tired and I give her a hand usually. I hope that I can stay with my Mom because I love my Mom mostly.

(2)媽媽眼睛小小的,頭髮長長捲捲的,臉圓圓的像檸檬,因為有一點一點的小雀斑‧而我最喜歡媽媽的手,因為媽媽的手很大能緊緊的抱住我,還會煮好吃的東西給我吃‧我最喜歡和媽媽一起去買東西,因為媽媽都會買我喜歡的牛奶、餅乾給我‧我希望能永遠的和媽媽在一起,因為所最愛的人是媽媽‧在這個節日裡,我要謝謝您,[媽媽,祝您母親節快樂!!]

My Mom has long and curly hairs, small eyes. Her face is round shape like a lemon because with a little freckles. I like my Mom’s hand mostly because they are big enough to hold me tightly and can make delicious food. I like to go shopping with my Mom mostly because she always buys milk and cookies for me. I hope that I can stay with my Mom because I love my Mom mostly. On this occasion, I want to thank you so mush.

Mom, Happy Mother’s Day!!

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    A:

    我媽媽有著長長的直髮和白皙的皮膚。她時常在臉上擦粉和塗抹睫毛膏在眼睛上,所以她的眼睛看起來是閃亮的;但是她的嘴唇沒有擦上任何的口紅或脣膏。當我媽媽抹上眼影和穿著裙子的時候,她是世界上最漂亮的女人。另外,我非常喜歡我媽媽的手因為她有雙溫柔的、溫暖的和舒適的雙手。另外,我媽媽是個很棒的廚房美術家,她的拿手菜是煮酸辣湯,雖然一點都不辛辣!我媽媽非常辛苦的工作,我總是在媽媽勞累的時候幫忙媽媽。我最希望的就是把媽媽留在身邊 因為我愛她勝過一切。

    My Mom has long straight hair and white-skinned. She wipes her face with powder and mascaras her eyes all the time, that makes her eyes are shining; but she doesn't put on any lipstick or rouge on her lips. When my Mom smears the eye shadow and wears skirt, she is the most pretty woman in the world. In the further, I really like my Mom's hand because she has a pair of soft、 mild and comfortable hands. In addition, my Mom is a great culinary artist, her forte is to cook Sour and Spicy Soup, even though it not peppery at all! My Mom works hardly, I always give her a helping hand when she is tired. What I most hoped is to keep side with my Mom forever because I love my Mom more than anything.

    B:

    我的媽媽有著長長捲捲的頭髮和小小的眼睛,她的臉看起來像檸檬,因為上面有一點點的小雀斑‧而我最喜歡媽媽的手,因為媽媽的手很大能緊緊的抱住我,還會煮好吃的東西給我吃‧我最喜歡和媽媽一起去買東西,因為媽媽都會買我喜歡的牛奶、餅乾給我‧我希望能永遠的和媽媽在一起,因為所最愛的人是媽媽‧在這個特別的節日裡,我想跟您說: “謝謝您,媽媽。祝您母親節快樂,還有我愛妳。”

    My Mom has long curly hair and small eyes. Her face is look like a lemon because it has little freckles on it. I like my Mom’s hand mostly because they are huge enough to hold me tightly; also it can make delicious food. She always buys milk and cookies for me when we shopping together, that are the most reason why I like to go out with her. I hope to be able to stay with my mother forever because I love my Mom mostly. On this special day, I want to say: “thank you, Mom. Happy Mother’s Day and I love you.”

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