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フィビー 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

幫我看一下英文文法,謝謝

Thanks for your quotation,we will increase quantities and give you a formal order next week

Can we order A & B just 1roll(with white base paper)? If not,please advice the min order.

Is the price maintain USD100?

Look forward to your reply

以上是寫給廠商的信,寫的簡單就好,可以幫我看一下文法嗎?

謝謝~

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  • May
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    大致上OK。有幾個小建議:

    1.Thanks for your quotation.(逗號改句號)

    2. We will increase the quantity(用單數 quantity)

    3.Can we order A & B for just one roll....(加介係詞for)

    4.If not,please advise the min order(要用動詞advise)

    5.Is the price still USD100? (要用maintain的話,前面要用助動詞,不可用be動詞)

    大概就是這樣了。

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  • 呆子
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    Thanks for your quote submittion,we will place an order on you with the additional quantity next week.

    Can we order 1roll of A & B (with white base paper)separately? If not,please advice me of MOQ.

    Is the price the same as before, USD100?

    I look forward to hearing from you.*****

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  • 小志
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    http://tw.myblog.yahoo.c

    很好沒有問題

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