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(20點)簡單句/複雜句/複合句的分類 幫忙挑錯

已經爬了一些知識跟辜狗http://w3.kghs.kh.edu.tw/~library/self_study/engli...

麻煩高手幫忙看看芭

我知道這篇很長

可是禮拜一要考> <"

拜託各位高手了

以下每句用代號表示:

< 1 > 簡單句 (S+V)

< 2 > 複合句 (對等連接詞)

< 3 > 複雜句 (附屬連接詞)

< 4 > 複合複雜句

There are roughly three New Yorks. < 1 > There is, first, the New York of the man or woman who was born there, who takes the city for granted and accepts its size, its turbulence as natural and inevitable. < 3不知道這種and算對等連接詞嗎> Second, there is the New York of the commuter--the city that is devoured by locusts each day and spat out each night. < 3 > Third, there is New York of the person who was born somewhere else and came to New York in quest of something. < 3 > Of these trembling cities the greatest is the last--the city of final destination, the city that is a goal. < 3 > It is this third city that accounts for New York’s high strung disposition, its poetical deportment, its dedication to the arts, and its incomparable achievements. < 4 > Commuters give the city its tidal restlessness, natives give it solidity and continuity, but the settlers give it passion. < 2 >And whether it is a farmer arriving from a small town in Mississippi to escape the indignity of being observed by her neighbors, or a boy arriving from the Corn Belt with a manuscript in his suitcase and a pain in his heart, it makes no difference: each embraces New York with the intense excitement of first love, each absorbs New York with the fresh yes of an adventurer, each generates heat and light to dwarf the Consolidated Edison Company. < 4 >

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The commuter is the queerest bird of all. < 1 > The suburb he inhabits has no essential vitality of its own and is a mere roost where he comes at day's end to go to sleep. < 3 >

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He has fished in Manhattan's wallet and dug out coins, but has never listened to Manhattan's breathing, never awakened to its morning, never dropped off to sleep in its night. < 3 >

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He has fished in Manhattan's wallet and dug out coins, but has never listened to Manhattan's breathing, never awakened to its morning, never dropped off to sleep in its night. < 上面改成 2 >

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The terrain of New York is such that a resident sometimes travels farther, in the end, than a commuter. < 3 >

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The journey of the composer Irving Berlin from Cherry Street in the lower East Side to an apartment uptown was through an alley and was only three or four miles in length; but it was like going three times around the world. < 2 >

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    There are roughly .... < 1>〔正確〕;

    There is, first, .... <3>不知道這種and算對等連接詞嗎?〔正確〕; 這句你打漏了一個and,應在第二個who之前,且不需要逗號.and是對等連接詞.

    Second, there is .... < 3>;〔正確〕

    Third, there is .... < 3>;〔正確〕

    Of these trembling .... <3>;〔正確〕

    It is this third city.... < 4>;〔錯誤〕,這題應是<3>,因為and連接的不是子句,不能算是compound結構

    Commuters give ...<2>〔正確〕

    And whether it is .... < 4>;〔正確〕 最後的each前面應加上and才對,否則結構有問題.這題是前面主句是complex結構,但冒號後面的同位語是compound結構.

    The commuter.... < 1 >〔正確〕

    The suburb he .... < 3 > 〔正確〕

    He has fished in Manhattan's wallet .... < 3 > 〔錯誤〕這是簡單句<1>,因為只有一個主詞.

    He has fished in Manhattan's wallet .... < 上面改成 2 > 〔錯〕這是簡單句,上面說明了

    The terrain of New York is .... < 3 > 〔正確〕但這句好像打漏字了

    The journey of the composer ..... < 2 >〔正確〕

    你的原文太長,電腦不接受,只好刪去大部分正文.

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