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無薪假仍要上假的人,懇請英文高手幫忙修改英文文章(希望勿使用翻譯軟體) The leisure activity that Mary used to the most was to play games, because it always lets her has the sense of fulfillment. Every time have a new video game going on the market, she always to try the best to buy it. When Mary started going exercise with her brother, she found... 顯示更多 無薪假仍要上假的人,懇請英文高手幫忙修改英文文章(希望勿使用翻譯軟體)
The leisure activity that Mary used to the most was to play games, because it always lets her has the sense of fulfillment. Every time have a new video game going on the market, she always to try the best to buy it. When Mary started going exercise with her brother, she found that herself eyesight were improved and had made more friends. Finally she understood indulge the video game’s disbenefit. Mary is not only the student who the most popular in the class now, but also advise those classmates to indulge play game frequently to do some beneficial good for health’s activity.
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