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這封英文信語法有問題嗎?

Dear sally

I am very glud to have received the letter you sent me two

weeks ago. I am very busy in the recent. Because I will take the exam

of the motorcycle. So I often study the usage of the motorcycle.

At last week, my cousin came to visit me from Hong Kong.

She has lived for five days at my home. I have shown her around the

scenic spots and historical sites in Macao. After, she and I have gone

to several famous casino in Macao,Then I and she has taken her to

buy the hand letter. I tell you and know, my cousin marries at the

end of the year of this year. My cousin has raised a puppy in her

new house. The dog is very love. The dog let me remember and

you past day.

這是某封英文信的其中一部分

請幫我看看這部份的語法或是句子結構哪裡有問題

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Dear Sally :

    I am very glad to receive the letter you sent to me two

    weeks ago. I am very busy recently. Because I will take the exam of motorcycle pracitce, I often study the use of motorcycles. Last week, my cousin came to visit me from Hong Kong. She had lived here for five days at my home. I had shown her around the (scenic) spots and historical sites in Macao. After that, I and she went to several famous casinos in Macao, then I took her to buy the letters. I just want to let you know, my cousin got married at the end of the year. She had raised a puppy in her new house. The dog is very lovely. He reminds me of you and the good old days.

    1.

    a)glud改為glad(高興)

    b)I am very glad to receive the letter you sent to me two

    weeks ago. 不需用到被動式have + pp

    2.

    a)用慣用法I am very busy recently即可.

    b)時間副詞前不需用in the...修飾

    3.

    a)because不可和so連用

    b)文法上沒問題.但讀起來不順口.若您的意思是要考機車拆解等實際操作本句可改為

    Because I will take the exam of motorcycle pracitce, I often study the use of motorcycles.

    4.

    Last week, my cousin came to visit me from Hong Kong.

    a)原因類似2.a)

    5.

    She had lived here for five days at my home. I had shown her around the (scenic) spots and historical sites in Macao.

    a)需加here以表明地點.

    b)spot即為景點之意不用再加scenic

    6.

    After that, I and she went to several famous casinos in Macao, then I took her to buy the letters.

    a) After 後須加that以表明在什麼之後

    b)若為說話或寫作時提及1)i2)you3)he/she則順序為2)>1)>3)

    若為說話或寫作時提及4)we2)you3)they則順序為4)>5)>6)

    c)用過去式及可

    d)casinos為複數

    e)then逗號後要小寫

    f)letter及可

    7.

    I just want to let you know, my cousin got married at the

    end of the year. She had raised a puppy in her new house.

    a)I just want to let you know口氣較順

    b)get married或marry 某人為習慣用法

    c)at the end of the year及可

    d)用She代替Cousin避免重覆

    8.

    The dog is very lovely. He reminds me of you and the good old days.

    a)若不知道公母通常用he代指.用it較少見

    b)lovely(可愛)

    c)若您的意思是它讓您想起您的說話對像及你們的過往.則可這樣寫

    參考資料: 國中高中英文文法/舊多益800分/外領證照/實際經驗
  • 匿名使用者
    7 年前

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  • 槑仙
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前

    Dear sally = Dear Sally, (交情很好用Dearest / 英文名字 + , )

    (只打出錯誤 = 方便校對)

    I am very glud to have received the letter you *sent me two weeks ago.

    @I am very glad to receive your letter. (是現在收到)

    @I am very glad to receive the letter that you *....

    I am very busy in the recent. Because I will take *the exam of the motorcycle.

    @These days, I am so busy for going to take *.... ( I能省就省=同中文)

    So I often study the usage (of the motorcycle.)

    @So.....(of the motorcycle 改成 about it = 不要再重述 )

    At last week, *my cousin came to visit me from Hong Kong.

    @Last week, *......

    She has lived *for five days at my home.

    @She (還在=has stayed / 離開=had stayed) *.....(主要強調她還在不在)

    以下用簡單過去式敘述 vs 現在完成式 是事情還沒過去

    I have shown her around *the scenic spots and historical sites in Macao.

    @I took her to the ... and the (前後都有the比較好)......

    After, she and I have gone to *several famous casino in Macao,

    @After(甚麼要講出來) sightseeing, I and her went to *....

    Then I and she has taken her tobuy the hand letter.

    @And then, we went to buy this hand letter toghther. (要用this)

    I tell you and know, my cousin marries at the end of the year of this year.

    @Just teeling you, my cousin is going to marry at the end of this year.

    My cousin has raised a *puppy in her new house.

    @My cousin has a *...... (養育小孩才用raise )

    The dog is very love.

    @That dog is very cut / lovely. (狗是公?是母?)

    The dog let me remember and you past day.

    @And he / she reminds me thinking of + those past days with you.

    (不是戀情最好不要這麼說)

    PS:And he / she reminds me thinking of +

    不是戀情=those were the days, my friend.

    逝去戀情=the way we were.

    2009-03-28 18:42:42 補充:

    不要說我抄襲喔!~只是打字太慢啦~

  • 1 0 年前

    I think it is like this!

    Dear Sally,

    I am very glad to have received the letter you sent me two

    weeks ago. Recently, I am very busy, Because I will take the

    motorcycle exam. So I often study the usage of the motorcycle.

    Last week, my cousin came to visit me from Hong Kong. She has lived for five days at my house. I have shown her around the scenic spots and historical sites in Macao. Then we went to several famous casino in Macao. Then I took her to go buy letter and envelopes. Also my cousin marries on the end of this year. My cousin has raised a puppy in her new house. The dog is very loveable. The dog lets me think of you.

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