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幫忙修改英文句子

這是我自己寫出來的句子,想請教英文高手幫我修改句子,

或是幫我看看我這樣寫有什麼問題,謝謝^ ^

Welcome to join our dance party.

We hope you can join our activities. Thank you very much.

The athletics exercises dance has already been listed as a formal

event. Be highly valued in the international.

This is exercise of power and beauty. Everyone will like it.

Our program is going to begin.

Above all is the modern dance.

And then is the party time.

Everyone can enjoy dancing.

Next is Latin dance music that everyone likes.

In America that everyone also likes this kind of songs.

Thanks for these wonderful performance,

today is come to the end.

We hope everyone will like it.

See you next time.

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    Welcome to join our dance party,(大多是用 dancing party) we hope you will enjoy our activities, thank you very much.

    The athletic dance has already been listed as a formal event which being highly valued in the international, and that is an exercise of power and beauty, everyone will like it.

    Our program is going to begin, above all is the modern dance, and then is the party time, in which everyone can enjoys dancing, next is our like, Latin dance music .

    In America, everybody also likes this kind of songs, thanks for all these wonderful performances, our activities will come to an end now, (We will call it a day now 我們現在將要結束這活動) we hope everyone likes it. (活動已結束,”喜歡”至少應用現在式,不適合用未來式), see you next time.

    everyone 用得太多,內文部分改為 everybody 及 our.

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