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關於英文文章的outline,support 句子是內詳20

可否請外語系或是懂英文的高手幫我解答~!

PS:(我打好久!希望是真的懂英文的人能夠為我指點迷津!20點不會白白浪費的!謝謝你!!!)

1.一篇英文文章的outline大綱 要怎麼去寫?

2.還有支持句supporting sentence~要如何從文章中去找?

下面有一篇文章~請幫我解答這篇文章的outline還有支持句

謝謝

There are three kinds of bad drivers you see on the streets and

highways of almost any country. The first kind of bad driver is the

wannabe Grand Prix racer. This kind of driver drives very

aggressively. For example, he or she steps on the gas and roars away a millisecond before a traffic signal turns green.

Driving in the passing lane and ignoring speed limits are normal for

this kind of driver. The second kind of bad driver is the modern multitasker.

Modern multitasker include drivers such as working mothers and

overworked businessmen and women. They eat a sandwich, drink a

cup of coffee, talk on their cell phone, and discipline the children fighting in the back seat while speeding down the highway at 65mph.

The last kind is the cautious driver. The cautious driver drivea v-e-r-y

slowly and carefully. For instance, he or she drives no faster than

40 mph on highways and slows down to 30 on every curve.

When making a turn, he or she almost comes to a full stop before inching around the corner.

In conclusion, bad drivers can be speedsters,"slowsters," or just

inattentive, but you have to watch out for all of them!

PS:(我打好久!希望是真的懂英文的人能夠為我指點迷津!20點不會白白浪費的!謝謝你!!!)

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Helix~

那麼你說的outline是要怎嚜用英文寫出來呢?

是你說的中文直接翻成英文就好嗎?

課本寫說:

Topic sentence

supporting point

1.detail(example...)

2.detail

supporting point

1.detail(example...)

2.detail

supporting point

1.detail(example...)

2.detail

Concluding sentence

上面我知道可是我不知道怎嚜從文章去抓這些來寫

2 個已更新項目:

eleven~

謝謝你的建議

我知道這些意思

只是我不知道怎嚜去抓那些片段來寫成大剛還有支持句

我有再修課

可是老師外省人講的十分聽不懂他也不喜歡人家發問

上他的課超級無力

所以才想來這問問大家~~其實我不是要答案!我只是想知道一個範本大概的例子~~

不然我不知道從何著手

謝謝

3 個已更新項目:

Helix~

謝謝你的回答~

那麼我是否可再請教你另一個問題

關於descriptive details

List as many sights, smells sounds,etc...,as you can.

題目是:

"A subway station(or a bus stop) at rush hour"

還有除了小細節

這樣的題目要如何寫出supporting details?

2 個解答

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    1. 一篇英文文章的outline大綱 要怎麼去寫?

    這篇文章主要是在說三種差勁的駕駛人。第一種駕駛,不管任何行車限速,緊催油門。第二種駕駛不顧行車安全,一邊講電話,一邊喝咖啡,一邊開車。第三種差勁的駕駛非常小心,他已龜速前進,並且已趨近靜止的速度過彎。總之,讀者在開車時要小心這三種差勁的駕駛者。

    2. 還有支持句supporting sentence~要如何從文章中去找?

    Supporting Sentences 是在文章裡證明作者說的話是事實的句子。當作者說第一種駕駛人開車很快的時候,除了說他開車很快,他還指出在什麼時候,何在什麼地方,這樣的句子就稱為supporting sentences。

    如果有任何問題,也可以再問我。

    2009-04-11 13:19:54 補充:

    其實你現在在學的東西是美國和加拿大高中英文課裡必修的一課。這種文章叫做 5-Paragraph Essay。如果你Summary需要用英文寫的話,你可以直接把我寫的大綱翻成英文。

    2009-04-11 13:20:24 補充:

    Topic Sentence:

    There are three kinds of bad drivers you see on the streets and

    highways of almost any country.

    Supporting Point 1:

    The first kind of bad driver is the wannabe Grand Prix racer.

    2009-04-11 13:20:39 補充:

    Point 1 Detail:

    For example, he or she steps on the gas and roars away a millisecond before a traffic signal turns green.

    Supporting Point 2:

    The second kind of bad driver is the modern multitasker.

    2009-04-11 13:20:54 補充:

    Point 2 Detail:

    They eat a sandwich, drink a cup of coffee, talk on their cell phone, and discipline the children fighting in the back seat while speeding down the highway at 65mph.

    Supporting Point 3:

    The last kind is the cautious driver.

    2009-04-11 13:20:59 補充:

    Point 3 Detail:

    For instance, he or she drives no faster than

    40 mph on highways and slows down to 30 on every curve.

    Conclusion:

    n conclusion, bad drivers can be speedsters,"slowsters," or just

    inattentive, but you have to watch out for all of them!

    2009-04-12 03:16:53 補充:

    Supporting Sentence 和 Supporting Details 都要先知道你的 Topic Sentence 是什麼才能夠寫。 雖然你有給我 Topic,但你沒有給我 Topic Sentence,所以我也不知道從哪裡下手。

    至於Describtive Details,就如同題目上說的,寫下你subway的時候可以聽到什麼,看到什麼,聞到什麼,感受到什麼。這些可以給讀者畫面的句子都是describtive details。但很重要的時整篇文章的一致性。整篇文章的每一句話都是為了要證明你的topic sentence是對的。不然就是廢話。通常老師會很重視這一點。

    參考資料: 自己, 自己
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  • eleven
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    這種東西,

    若您不懂請再重新多看幾遍書本;

    若看不懂,顯見您語文能力仍不太夠

    或買的作文書(?)太難不適合您,

    請去圖書館借幾本英文寫作教學來看。

    再不然,若您正在修課,

    請直接問教師。

    有時作文、文法這種東西,

    每個老師的解讀和給予學生的作業指示不同,

    請不要依賴網友免得觀念愈弄愈迷糊~!

    如果您是自學,

    就請找身邊英文好的朋友幫您,

    否則,

    一味依賴網友保證您永遠學不好,

    因為知識加充斥不少半對半不對的內容,

    且這樣您永遠只學得到片段學不到整體!

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