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英文翻譯 很急感謝

April.23 is a special day. On this day a beautiful and smart girl was born in the earth.Her name is XX. Because of u it’s become import.

Although many events happened to u .but they are gone! I’m very happy u come out the sorrow. It means the luck day will be coming. This card has a ship. It bring my best wishes to u and bring the sorrow out. I wish u have a healthy and copious year!

可以麻煩幫我看一下文法上有什麼問題嗎?? 感謝~~

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  • 懿珩
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
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    大致上我覺得沒甚麼問題, 只有一些小地方改一下會更順

    April 23rd is a special day. On this day a beautiful and smart girl was born "on" the earth.

    Her name is XX. Because of u it's become "important".

    Although many events happened to u, but they are gone! I'm very happy "for" u "comeing out of the sorrow". It means the "lucky" day will be coming "soon". "On top of" this card has a ship. It "brings" my best wishes to u and "brings" the sorrow "away". I wish u have a healthy and copious year!

    一點點小建議提供您參考

  • 1 0 年前

    April 23rd is a special day. On this day a beautiful and smart girl was born on earth.

    Her name is XX. Because of you the day bacame important.

    Although a lot of events happened to you, but they are gone! I'm very happy finding out that you came out from the sorrow. It means the lucky day will be arriving for you. There is ship on my card. It brings my best wishes to you and brings the sorrow away from you. I wish you have a healthy and copious year!

    2009-04-21 10:15:54 補充:

    I wish you a healthy and copious year! Srry no ''have''.

    2009-04-24 05:56:15 補充:

    what the heck?

    參考資料: I live in Toronto
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