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誰可以幫我看看我的翻譯順不順

誰可以幫我看看我的翻譯 英文不太好 麻煩誰可以幫我看看順不順

This natural lotion has most of the basic elements foe an efficacious emulsion except for one thing- a true emulsion. the emulsion system used in the formula contains beeswax, cetearyl alcohol and polysorbate 60 , all of which can help with emulsion stability in the right conditions. If the beeswax is neutralized, it can form an o/w emulsifier that can be stabilized by the liquid crystals forming cetearyl alcohol The polysorbate 60 could further increase stability by reducing the particle sizes,but there is no neutralizer present on the label: So what is really holding this product together?

這自然化妝水有很多的基本元素組成的有效乳化液。

用在乳化液裡面的成分包含蜜蠟、鯨蠟硬脂醇和聚山梨醇酯 60,可能幫助乳化液穩定.如果蜜蠟被中和,它可能形成鯨蠟硬脂醇的液晶來穩定o/w乳化劑聚山梨醇酯 60(Tween 60)可通過微粒大小可能會再進一步增加穩定,但是沒有中和劑的話,那麼要怎麼讓這些東西組合成一種產品呢?

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我沒有打錯ㄟ 我的是文章要翻成中文

可是一直覺的中文怪怪的 誰可以幫幫我

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  • ricky
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
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    化妝水 Toner

    乳液 Lotion/ Moisturizer

    http://tw.knowledge.yahoo.com/question/question?qi...

    o/w = The logarithm of the octanol/water partition coefficient (often abbreviated logP) describes the solubility of a compound in octanol

    http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&client=firefox-...

    這自然化妝水有很多的基本元素組成的有效乳化液。

    This natural toner is an effective lotion with lots of fundamental elements.

    用在乳化液裡面的成分包含蜜蠟、鯨蠟硬脂醇和聚山梨醇酯 60,可能幫助乳化液穩定

    The lotion contains beeswax, cetearyl alcohol, and polysorbate 60, which are used to stabilize the lotion.

    如果蜜蠟被中和,它可能形成鯨蠟硬脂醇的液晶來穩定o/w

    If the beeswax was neutralized, it could create the liquid crystal form of cetearyl alcohol to stabilize the o/w.

    乳化劑聚山梨醇酯 60(Tween 60)可通過微粒大小可能會再進一步增加穩定,

    The emulsifying agent, polysorbate 60, could, furthermore, increase the stability by reducing the particle size.

    但是沒有中和劑的話,那麼要怎麼讓這些東西組合成一種產品呢?

    Without the neutralizing agent, how can these components combine to form a product?

    (PS: what do you mean by "可通過微粒大小"??)

    2009-05-03 03:28:07 補充:

    This natural lotion has most of the basic elements foe an efficacious emulsion except for one thing- a true emulsion.

    除了缺少了一項主要成份外, 這乳液是由很多的基本元素組成的有效天然產品。

    2009-05-03 03:28:53 補充:

    the emulsion system used in the formula contains beeswax, cetearyl alcohol and polysorbate 60 , all of which can help with emulsion stability in the right conditions.

    在正確的情況下其所有成份包括蜂蠟、鯨蠟硬脂醇和聚山梨醇酯 60 都可以幫助其穩定性

    2009-05-03 03:35:19 補充:

    If the beeswax is neutralized, it can form an o/w emulsifier that can be stabilized by the liquid crystals forming cetearyl alcohol

    如果蜂蠟被中和化,其乳液的 o/w 數直會被改變並此這會讓鯨蠟硬脂醇的液晶更容易來穩定其產品

    2009-05-03 03:35:54 補充:

    The polysorbate 60 could further increase stability by reducing the particle sizes,but there is no neutralizer present on the label: So what is really holding this product together?

    雖然聚山梨醇酯 60可以降低其微粒大小來再更進一步增加其穩定性,其產品標簽上並沒有標明有中和劑, 那這些成份是要如何成功的組合在一起來成為一個有效的產品呢?

    參考資料: ME staying & studying in the US
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  • 正確的是這個---如下

    This natural lotion has the many fundamental element composition effective emulsion. Uses the ingredient contains the beeswax, the spermaceti stearin inside the emulsion to gather mellowly the sorbitol ester 60, possibly helps the emulsion to be stable. If beeswax neutral, it will possibly form the spermaceti hard lipidol the liquid crystal to stabilize the o/w emulsifier to gather the sorbitol ester 60 (Tween 60) to be possible possibly again to further increase through the particle size stably, but will not have neutralizaing agent, then how can let these things combine one product?

    妳的第一行就錯了

    參考資料: 自己....
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