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這是我翻譯的英文自傳....幫忙檢查看看有沒有哪裡錯,謝。 Autobiography of Arnold Huang On July 10, 1900, I was born in Homei, a small town in Changhua. Father is a factory worker, and mother is a housewife. I have an older sister who majors in nursing and a younger sister who will graduate from high school this year. Father makes money... 顯示更多 這是我翻譯的英文自傳....幫忙檢查看看有沒有哪裡錯,謝。

Autobiography of Arnold Huang

On July 10, 1900, I was born in Homei, a small town in Changhua. Father is a factory worker, and mother is a housewife. I have an older sister who majors in nursing and a younger sister who will graduate from high school this year. Father makes money for the whole family. Although the economy is not so good, we still enjoy a harmonious family life.
I entered Homei elementary and junior high school at primary neighborhood schools. Nine years later, I entered Lugang senior high school through a competitive entrance examination and majored in Commercial Management. There I studied very hard so that I have known many commercial knowledge, and I got licences like Accounting, Word Processing, English and Chinese Typing.
I joined the badminton and chess clubs in the first and second grades of senior high school. Playing badminton makes me feel relaxing while playing chess enhances my brain. In the third grade of senior high school, I dropped out the clubs and studied hard for the Joint Entrance Exam.
I also found my interesting through the exam, so I attended National Formosa University and majored Applied Foreign Languages. Because I don’t want to lose commercial skills which I learned in senior high school, I not only study professional English, but other subjects related to the commerce like economic. I also join the AFL Student Organization to learn social skill and organization. A colorful university life is what I want to have.
I would like to go on graduate institute after getting the bachelor’s degree, and I wish I can go abroad studying if possible in the future.
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