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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文的(不是翻譯)!!!20點喲!!!

in this art work, the photos I used show some of my favorite pop stars, and I used newspapers to show the world I am living in. Mostly I used warm colour because it is closer to my personality. I drew lots of musical notes because I always enjoy listening to music. At the middle of the art work, I drew a rose growing from a glass bottle which means I wish l can learned to take difficulty in my stride like the rose, even it’s is a tough condition, I wish I can still not to evade it.

我美術老師說要寫一段intention有關自己的作品

請各位大大幫我看看我寫的有沒有錯誤或可以修改的地方???

還有這個作品是有關我的一生的 我不知道應該要取什麼名字(要幫這張圖取一個英文的名字!!!)

明天就要交了 所以越快越好喔!!!

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To Yui:

竟然是外國人我就直接打英文比較方便

first u kno dat dat i dont mean dat i cut pic from newspaper i mean by i used newspaper(like a cut thing from it)and some photo from internet...

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&the rest is fine btw i dont rily kno how do we describ like a rose brake through the glass bottle and keep on growing nd i think my teacher will like la poetic kind...thx a lot

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omg i forgot dat...i rilly wish u can help me think of a rilly poetic name 4 my artwork cuz i hve absolutely no idea!!!the artwork is about my life event!!!

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To Poyuan:

我直接打英文囉~

i kno about dat grammer mistakes u said thx a lot but u kno dat i need the sucking poetry feelings and i thought about using "which means" but i think is not dat poetic ... anyway...thx

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& cannot use my art work 4 la name cuz everone kno is my art work...the point of it is making a name

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  • Yui
    Lv 4
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    先來改改您的短文吧@@~

    In this artwork, I have used photos of my favourite pop starts plus pieces cut from newspapers to show the world I am living in. I have used mostly warm colours because they indicate my own personalities. I have drawn lots of musical notes since I enjoy listening to music very much. In the centre of my artwork, there is a rose growing outwards from a glass bottle which symblises how I am aiming to learn to face any challenges in my life and improve myself. Just like the continuous growth of the rose in a tough condition; like how I do not want to evade any issues and problems I might encounter in the future.

    您的有些字句有點怪怪的@@所以我可能改了一整句,

    不過不用擔心意思應該沒有不同。

    我自己改的,請放心,我是外國人來的。。

    至於畫的名字嘛~因為我也沒看到所以很難決定,

    畢竟是你自己畫的,靈感就來自於你心裡!!

    名字可以有創造力一點不一定是要真有的單字,

    憑感覺拼出來的單字其實也可以,

    只要對你自己有意義的話。。。

    2009-05-26 19:20:32 補充:

    Well~ur English is fine wen u talk wif me but I wonder how cum u dnt write proper writing lol~

    Ok, for the rose breaking through I guess u can jst explain it in this simple way so that ur teacher wud b able 2 understand more easily, or mayb u can use da word "breach" instead of "break through"?

    2009-05-26 19:20:37 補充:

    A poetic name, ahuh!

    [No Rose Without a Thorn]<<<沒有無刺的玫瑰; prbly can c some indication abt wt u actually mean in ur artwork@@

    [Breaching!]<<<<衝破!! Like waves breaching sea walls; 4 life, u overcome challenges, makes sense or not?!

    Mite b useful 2 u I dnt noe~

  • ?
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前

    Take this!

    1. A xxx rose, a xxx me

    A breaching rose, a real me

    A breaching rose, a growing me

    2. I, xxx a xxx rose

    I, and a breaching rose

    I, like a breaching rose

    3. I, xxx, rose

    I, breaching, rose

    I, challenging, rose

    4. Rose, xxx, me

    Rose, breaching, me

    Rose, challenging, me

  • 1 0 年前

    ~the photos which I used to show were some of my... ...

    ~and I used the newspapers to show to the world I am living in...

    ~Mostly, I had used warm colors(colours) because it were closer...

    ~I drew a lot of the musical notes because I always...

    ~which means I wished I could learn to take difficulties in my...

    ~in my stride, like the rose, although it was a tough condition...

    ~I wished I won't evade it.

    注意你的文法喔 有些錯誤 這篇可以叫 "My Art Work"

  • 幾米
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    個人感覺你寫的很棒了.

    致於取名, 既然是描繪你的人生, 那我覺得取名為 "MY LIFE" 如何呢!

    參考資料: ME.
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