英文的(不是翻譯)!!!20點喲!!!
in this art work, the photos I used show some of my favorite pop stars, and I used newspapers to show the world I am living in. Mostly I used warm colour because it is closer to my personality. I drew lots of musical notes because I always enjoy listening to music. At the middle of the art work, I drew a rose growing from a glass bottle which means I wish l can learned to take difficulty in my stride like the rose, even it’s is a tough condition, I wish I can still not to evade it.
我美術老師說要寫一段intention有關自己的作品
請各位大大幫我看看我寫的有沒有錯誤或可以修改的地方???
還有這個作品是有關我的一生的 我不知道應該要取什麼名字(要幫這張圖取一個英文的名字!!!)
明天就要交了 所以越快越好喔!!!
To Yui:
竟然是外國人我就直接打英文比較方便
first u kno dat dat i dont mean dat i cut pic from newspaper i mean by i used newspaper(like a cut thing from it)and some photo from internet...
&the rest is fine btw i dont rily kno how do we describ like a rose brake through the glass bottle and keep on growing nd i think my teacher will like la poetic kind...thx a lot
omg i forgot dat...i rilly wish u can help me think of a rilly poetic name 4 my artwork cuz i hve absolutely no idea!!!the artwork is about my life event!!!
To Poyuan:
我直接打英文囉~
i kno about dat grammer mistakes u said thx a lot but u kno dat i need the sucking poetry feelings and i thought about using "which means" but i think is not dat poetic ... anyway...thx
& cannot use my art work 4 la name cuz everone kno is my art work...the point of it is making a name
4 個解答
- YuiLv 41 0 年前最佳解答
先來改改您的短文吧@@~
In this artwork, I have used photos of my favourite pop starts plus pieces cut from newspapers to show the world I am living in. I have used mostly warm colours because they indicate my own personalities. I have drawn lots of musical notes since I enjoy listening to music very much. In the centre of my artwork, there is a rose growing outwards from a glass bottle which symblises how I am aiming to learn to face any challenges in my life and improve myself. Just like the continuous growth of the rose in a tough condition; like how I do not want to evade any issues and problems I might encounter in the future.
您的有些字句有點怪怪的@@所以我可能改了一整句，
不過不用擔心意思應該沒有不同。
我自己改的，請放心，我是外國人來的。。
至於畫的名字嘛~因為我也沒看到所以很難決定，
畢竟是你自己畫的，靈感就來自於你心裡!!
名字可以有創造力一點不一定是要真有的單字，
憑感覺拼出來的單字其實也可以，
只要對你自己有意義的話。。。
2009-05-26 19:20:32 補充：
Well~ur English is fine wen u talk wif me but I wonder how cum u dnt write proper writing lol~
Ok, for the rose breaking through I guess u can jst explain it in this simple way so that ur teacher wud b able 2 understand more easily, or mayb u can use da word "breach" instead of "break through"?
2009-05-26 19:20:37 補充：
A poetic name, ahuh!
[No Rose Without a Thorn]<<<沒有無刺的玫瑰; prbly can c some indication abt wt u actually mean in ur artwork@@
[Breaching!]<<<<衝破!! Like waves breaching sea walls; 4 life, u overcome challenges, makes sense or not?!
Mite b useful 2 u I dnt noe~
- ?Lv 51 0 年前
Take this!
1. A xxx rose, a xxx me
A breaching rose, a real me
A breaching rose, a growing me
2. I, xxx a xxx rose
I, and a breaching rose
I, like a breaching rose
3. I, xxx, rose
I, breaching, rose
I, challenging, rose
4. Rose, xxx, me
Rose, breaching, me
Rose, challenging, me
- 1 0 年前
~the photos which I used to show were some of my... ...
~and I used the newspapers to show to the world I am living in...
~Mostly, I had used warm colors(colours) because it were closer...
~I drew a lot of the musical notes because I always...
~which means I wished I could learn to take difficulties in my...
~in my stride, like the rose, although it was a tough condition...
~I wished I won't evade it.
注意你的文法喔 有些錯誤 這篇可以叫 "My Art Work"
