(比如警察，消防人員都是要挑戰他們的第一反應，一項體能測試是強制性的。) 這依據我打錯ㄚ 這樣才正確
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1. When people get old, their physical strength and ability to react decline. These phenomena do not only affect their ability to be productive; they also can increase the chance of being injured while working. This is a down side, especially for the field of manufacturing, which requires workers to have physical strength and endurance. Quick reaction and physical flexibility are also required for police work and firefighting; otherwise, people in these professions will always be in peril while performing their duties in dengerous environments.
2. Because people's stamina starts to decline at the age of 60, and the working situation in modern society is getting more and more intense, retirement is a social right for all people. Abolishing the official retirement age would be a punishment. *There are many benefits to retirement, such as : getting relieved from the causes of nervousness of mind and body, being able to walk away from an unsatisfactory or unhealthy job environment , and reviving the passion for life after decades of hard work.
After read your writing again, I found the sentence in the end of the second line of #2, which I translated as: *There are many benefits to retirement, such as: ....., you seemed trying to say:
Some retirees mentioned the befefits of retirement, such as: ....
If this is what you mean, you may use it.
2009-06-03 10:26:08 補充：
typing error in the notes:
Some retirees mentioned the *benefits of retirement, such as:
- 1 0 年前
1. With the aging age, the reaction ability and energy weaken; this phenomenon will not only affect the productivity, but also increase the happanance of work injury.
比如警察，消防人員和其他第一反應，一項體能測試是強制性的。====> 這句話看不太懂耶 可以說一下嗎？
2.The stamina of people start to decline at the age of 60, moreover, works nowadays become intensified. Due to the above reasons, retirement is people's right to rest their exhausted body. Thus, abolishing the limit of retirement is a kind of punishment. The adventages of retirement are as follows: eliminate their mental nerves, leave uncomfortable working environment, help them to change routine life and stir up their passions toward life.
2009-05-28 11:12:39 補充：
For example, police and fireworkers need to react quicily without any hesitation, or the situation can be very perilous.參考資料： ME, me