英文句子請幫我看看文法還有單字

Question

while my eyes are filled with tears,I tried to laugh about it,hiding the tears in my eyes.

我想請問這段句子
文法跟句意有沒有錯誤跟不順暢的


可以順便再問一個
痛.悲傷.忍耐.淚水
的英文嗎?
名詞的


謝謝

Alice · Accepted Answer

while my eyes are filled with tears,I tried to laugh about it,hiding the tears in my eyes.
應該改成:
while my eyes are filling with tears,I am tried to laugh about it, and hide the tears in my eyes.
或 while my eyes are filling with tears,I feel tried to laugh about it, and hide the tears in my eyes.

如果是過去式的話則是:
while my eyes were filling with tears, I was tried to laugh about it, and hid the tears in my eyes.
或 while my eyes were filling with tears,I felt tired to laugh about it, and hid the tears in my eyes.

P.S. tired是形容詞所以前面要加be動詞或動詞,不可當動詞使用。
       請問這句子是出自一篇文章嗎?如果能看到多點文章裡的句子，能有助於了解這兩個句子及做更正確的修正。



痛 : hurt, pain, anguish, ache, agony
悲傷: sadness, sorrow, grief
忍耐:  patience, tolerance.    endure, bear(這兩個為動詞)
淚水: tear, teardrop


希望能幫到你的忙，此外，如果你還想查甚麼字的話，yahoo奇摩字典應該有很多字，也應該會有詞類變化，可以參考看看。

2009-05-28 11:29:46 補充：
在兩個句子之間最好是要加連接詞(如果不將句子結束的話)，如: and, but

ASFDAFS · Answer

while my eyes are filled with tears,I tried to laugh about it,hiding the tears in my eyes.

if it's past tense it should b like :  while my eyes "were" filled with tears, i tried to laugh about it, hiding the tears in my eyes.

and if it's like present then its :  while my eyes are  filled with tears, i try to laugh about it, hiding the tears in my eyes

  i hope dat'll help :)

英文句子請幫我看看文法還有單字

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