曉雯 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請各位幫我檢查我的文法是否有誤

To me, tomorrow is another beginning. Tomorrow morning, we have to do the same thing as ususal. For example, school, familiar people and any familiar thing!

In addition, another beginning makes me set up a new target, which benefits me with different knowledge, get to know more people, make more benefit for member o association.

To sum up, there is a different view for tomorrow by every one. We

need to consider how to make our life more meaningful.

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For example, school, familiar people and any familiar thing!

我想要表達的是

每天都要上學,面對同樣的人,做同樣的事情等等....。

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  • 1 0 年前
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    To me, tomorrow is another beginning, in the morning, we always do the same thing as ususal, for example, go to school, meet with familiar peoples and deal with familiar things!

    In addition, every new beginning makes me set up a new target, which offers me a chance to get different knowledge, get to know more people and make more benefit for the members or association related to me.

    To sum up, every one has a different view for tomorrow, and we

    should consider how to make our lives more meaningful.

    2009-06-10 14:02:36 補充:

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    第一行in the morning 改為 from the morning

  • 1 0 年前

    Tomorrow is another beginning to me. We have to do the same thing every morning.

    For example, school, familiar people and any familiar thing! <==不好意思,這句你要表達甚麼?

    In addition, another beginning can make me set up a new target, which I can gain different knowledge, get to know more people and bring more benefits to members and association.

    As conclusion, everyone have different views for tomorrow. We need to think about how to make our life become more meaningful.

    希望可以幫到你 ^_^

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