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英文自傳 我想請大大幫我改文法

這是我幫我朋友做的英文自傳翻譯

我想知道 我在文法上面出了哪些錯

希望大大可以幫助我讓我明白

更能增進我的英文 謝謝

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Biography

-My family background

I have a harmonious househould. My family members are my parents, older sister and older brother. And I am the youngest child. My father is a boss in the ironworks. My mother is a housewife who is also help my father a lot when he need a helper. My sister is an office employee. And my brother is a vigorous college student.

I have grown up under the happy environment. They opened my mind when I was a child. They always told me that “to do a job honestly and with dedication”. Therefore, I become an outgoing, practical peraon with a shining smile.

- Autoanalysis

I am a cute boy who is full in form since I was a child. Hence, I always give people a kind sense. Sometimes, I help the old people to clean out the garbages. I am always pround of my uniqe personality which is so lively and sunny that my teacher called me “sunny boy” invariably. There are two things I have crazied about: doing exercise and watching “Thunderbolt puppet show”. The sport I like the most is playing basketball. I like to take part in basketball game because it can not only improve my basketball skills, but also make lots of basketball aficionado and broaden my horizons. In the weekend, I like to watching pupper show to relax myself.

I am a prson who is full of curiousity and observaion. I often investigate something at home, like pet a silkworm. I can expect whenever they spin while I observed them. I think it is my advantage over other people to produce the observation.

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1.家庭背景:

我有個幸福美滿的小家庭,家中有爸爸,媽媽,姐姐和哥哥,我是排行老 么的,爸爸是做鐵工的小老闆,媽媽是位同時兼任家庭主婦也幫忙我爸工作的大忙人,姐姐已經上了職場上班的小職員,哥哥是個活潑好動的大學生,我是在一個快樂的環境下成長,他們開破我的想法,在我小的時候,就時常對我說做人要腳踏實地,我也在過程中,變的很活潑,做事確實,常常帶著笑容過日子

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2.自我分析:

從小我就很可愛,也胖胖的,讓人有種親切的感覺,也時常幫助一些老人整理垃圾,個性很活潑,陽光,常被老師們說是個<陽光男孩>,興趣是球類運動,尤其是籃球,時常參加一些比賽,希望再當中能提升我自己的實力,學會團體的重要性,也在此認識許多的朋友,假日按時間的收看霹靂布袋戲,那是我的休閒活動也是我的興趣,,

我的好奇心和觀察力很強,常常在家中自己研究一些東西,像小時候拿蠶寶寶回家養時,我都會一直看著它們,幾時吐絲我可能都斯毫無偏差呢!!到現在可能這些都是我一大的優勢,比別人更認真的進行觀察,

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Biography

    -My family background

    I have a harmonious household, whose members are my parents, older sister, older brother and I, the youngest child, my father is a boss of an ironworks, my mother is a housewife who is also help my father a lot when he needs a helper, my sister is an office employee, and my brother is a vigorous college student.

    I grew up in this happy environment which opened my mind when I was a child, and my family always told me that “to do a job honestly and with dedication”, therefore, I became an outgoing and practical person with a shining smile.

    - Autoanalysis

    I had been a chubby, cute boy since I was a child, and I always gave people a sense of kindness, sometimes, I helped the old people to clean out their garbages, I am always proud of my that unique personality which is very lively and sunny, so that my teacher called me ”sunny boy” invariably, and there are two things which I have been crazied about, they are doing exercise and watching “Thunderbolt Puppet show”, the sport I like the most is playing basketball, I like to take part in basketball game because it can not only improve my basketball skills, but also make friends with lots of basketball aficionados and broaden my horizons, on weekends, I like to watching puppet show to relax myself, and I am a person who is full of curiosity and like to observe, I often investigate something at home, such as raising a silkworm, 1 always expect to observe them whenever they are spinning, I think the high spirit of concentrating on observation is my advantage over other people.

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  • 對不起ˊˋ 我搞錯了

    PET的動詞應該使撫摸吧

    我當時把她想成飼養ˊˋ

    謝謝你的提醒

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  • pet a silkworm?? 有這種東西嗎?

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  • 1 0 年前

    直接改了,你對照原文就知道在哪裡;)

    Biography

    -My family background

    I live in a harmonious household. My family members include my parents, older sister and older brother. I am the youngest child. My father works as an owner in the iron industry; my mother is a housewife and she often helps my father with his work; my sister works as an office employee; and my brother is a diligent college student. I grew up in a happy environment; and my family constantly challenges my thinking. They also taught me to face life with honesty and dedication. I have therefore grown into an outgoing individual who faces life with a bright smile.

    - Autoanalysis

    Since I was young, I have been described as rather &quot;chubby and cute.&quot; I am, however, quite charismatic at times too. Sometimes, I help old people by taking out the garbage. I have always been proud of my unique personality, which is so lively and enthusiastic to the point that my teacher gave me the nickname "sunny boy."

    There are two things I am passionate about: exercising and watching a traditional performance called "the Thunderbolt puppet show." The sport I like the most is basketball. I like to take part in basketball games because it does not only improve my basketball skills, it also allows me to make lots of friends who share the same passion and also broaden my horizons. On weekends, I prefer watching puppet shows for relaxation.

    I am a person who is full of curiosity and observational skills. I often investigate different things, and when I was young I kept silkworms as pets. I would spend ages observing them, till the point that I could grasp the exact time those silkworms start spinning silk. I think my greatest advantage over other people is that I observe everything very carefully.

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  • 1 0 年前

    1. family background: I have the happiness content small family, in the family have daddy, mother, the elder sister and elder brother, I am situated am old, daddy was the blacksmith young boss, mother is the position simultaneously holds a concurrent post of the housewife also to help the busy man who my father worked, the elder sister already to get up the commis who the work place went to work, elder brother was a lively active university student, I was grow under a joyful environment, they opened break my idea, when I was young, often to me said that was the human to be conscientious, I also in the process, changed am very lively, do the matter truly, bring the smiling face to live frequently

    參考資料: 英文辭典
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  • 1 0 年前

    1.家庭背景:

    I have the happiness content small family, in the family have daddy, mother, the elder sister and elder brother, I am situated am old, daddy was the blacksmith young boss, mother is the position simultaneously holds a concurrent post of the housewife also to help the busy man who my father worked, the elder sister already to get up the commis who the work place went to work, elder brother was a lively active university student, I was grow under a joyful environment, they opened break my idea, when I was young, often to me said that the personhood must be conscientious, I also in the process, changed am very lively, work truly, bring the smiling face to live frequently.

    2.自我分析:

    2009-06-10 17:09:49 補充:

    自我分析沒打到 sorry

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