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海賊王英文報告

不知道這樣寫可不可以 可以幫我看一下文法對不對嗎 ?另外 請問有大大可以簡單翻譯一下香吉士的技能嗎 附上中文 只要大概小小幾行就好!

My favorite cartoon is ONE PIECE. This story is about a main character Monkey D Luffy and his pirates partners Roronoa Zoro, Sanji,Nami,Usopp, Tony Tony Copper and Nico Robin navigate Going Mary go on a explore trip. I cadmire Sanji the cook very much.Alouth he is fond of women, but he is handsome,and really can cook well, he always make many delicilus food to everyone.

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    is、navigate和go都是動詞,一句話只能一個動詞,

    應改成:This story is about a pirate, Monkey D Luffy, and his partners Roronoa Zoro, Sanji, Nami, Usopp, Tony Tony Copper and Nico Robin who navigate Going Mary to go on an adventure.

    個人是覺得main character有點多餘;

    而通常兩個名詞放在一起前者是當形容詞,那pirate就不能加s,不過這裡我不太確定能不能這樣用。

    admire前面沒有c,我想您應該只是不小心按到。

    再來,沒有alough這個字。

    您應該是想打although(雖然)吧?

    although和but是不能用在同一個句子的,文法不通,

    舉例:1. Although hi is rich, hi is unhappy.

       2. He is rich but he is unhappy.

    照文意來看去掉but比較好。

    同一句的can去掉也會比較順。

    然後這一句從I admire... 到well句意就已充足,所以應該打句點,而且後面也是一個完整的句子。

    最後一句,主詞是he,所以動詞要加s;food不可數不可以用many;為某人做飯應用for。

    在下整篇重打一次,如有錯誤請指正。 

    My favorite cartoon is ONE PIECE. This story is about a pirate, Monkey D Luffy, and his partners Roronoa Zoro, Sanji, Nami, Usopp, Tony Tony Copper and Nico Robin, who navigate Going Mary to go on an adventure. I admire Sanji the cook very much. Althouth he is fond of women, he is handsome and really cook well. He always makes many delicilus dishes for everyone.

    有說明不清的地方可以問我。

    然後關於香吉士的招式英文,很遺憾在下幫不上忙~''~

    參考資料: 字典
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