陳小希 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文~科技論文寫作改寫

麻煩博班的學長姐幫忙修改一下

主要是改掉贅詞和口語化用詞

改成像是寫英文論文一樣的句子

小弟英文不好,麻煩一下嚕!!!!!

1.

Modification of the heuristics was made by Lacksonen and Enscore

(1993) to solve the dynamic layout problem.

2.

Precise measurement of neural network by practitioners is a heavy

emphasis of computer vision systems.

3.

Difficulty is encountered in explanation of the method to

inexperienced engineers owing to its computational complexity.

4.

Not only is the variability of the control factors considered by the

proposed procedure, but implementation of related tasks is performed.

5.

The guideline makes it specific that all parties will be notified by the

proper authorities when a problem arises.

6.

The different groups have to reach an agreement on how to make an

adjstment of the figures.

7.

The machine operator conducts transportation of the auto parts to the

assemply line.

8.

There can be little doubt that ink jet printers have a higher per-page

cost than laser printers.

9.

It is important to develop a more effective approach to solve the

complicated problem.

10.

It is recommended by us that the trackball be selected on the occasion

of purchasing a user interface device of this type.

已更新項目:

請問第6題是我的前面接你改的嗎??

還是................????看不太懂!!!!

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  • 匿名使用者
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    1. Lacksonen & Enscore modified the heuristics to solve the dynamic layout problem [ref. 1993].

    2. Precise measurement of the neural network is considered to be among the most important components of the computer vision system implementation by many practitioners. [ed. references please.]

    3. It is difficult to explain this method to some inexperienced engineers due to the computational complexity.

    4. I could not understand your statement 4 - so I am guessing below:

    The proposed procedure not only takes the dynamics of the controlling factors into consideration, but also implements many other related tasks. [ed. technical writing should not be this ambiguious.]

    5. The guide specifically requires that all parties be notified immediately when problem occurs.

    6. all groups must agree on the adjustment to the figures.

    7. The machine operator moves the auto parts to the assembly line.

    8. It can be shown that the per page costs for ink jet printers are higher than those of laser printers.

    9. it is important to develop an effective approach to solve this complex problem.

    10. It is our recommandation that the trackball be selected to purchse user interface devices of this type.

    2009-06-27 08:26:07 補充:

    (6) My sentence is indeed a little ambiguous. I tried to stick to your original writing as much as I can. Probably it is because I failed to understand your statement. Could you re-write in Tainwanese so that I can translate for you?

    thanks,

    Wen

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