強森 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請高手看一下我打的英文作文

題目是:The human race has one really effective weapon, and that is laughter

請高手幫我看一下有什麼要改要加強的

或是有標點符號跟文法的使用錯誤

可以的話順便跟我解釋一下

感恩^^

The difference between human and other animals is laugh. This special talent makes people close to each other, and solving the embarrassing problem. Why laughter has such a magic?

We all love to hear and see the joyful things, and laughter is one of the expressions that show the friendly and cheerful. For example, if friend of you failed the exam and you try to soothe him, would you cry with him or just laughing and tell him that it’s not that bad? For me, I choose the second one; because laughing makes people feel positive and able to face the difficulties

Furthermore, if you meet someone you want to know about but afraid to speak to him or her. The first step is to smile and laugh away; because laugh is the language that shows your friendly.

In conclusion, laugh is very impotent for everyone. We needed it to enriched our life and able to live more cheerful. Moreover, laugh is the way to soothe somebody’s hurting heart and show your friendly.

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  • 威宏
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    1 0 年前
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    The difference between human and other animals is laugh = What human differ from other animals is laugh

    This special talent makes people close to each other, and solve the embarrassing problem.

    Why does laughter have such a magic? = how come laughter has such a magic?

    and laughter is one of the expressions that shows the friendliness and

    cheerfulness.

    (X) if friend of you failed the exam and you try to soothe him,

    (O) If your friend failed in the exam and you try to console

    him /comfort him.

    Would you cry with him or just smile and tell him that's not so bad?

    (X) For me, I choose the second one; because laughing makes people feel positive and able to face the difficulties

    (O) In my speaking, I choose the second one ; because smile makes people feel positive to face the difficulties.

    (X) if you meet someone you want to know about but afraid to speak

    to him or her

    (O) if you meet someone you want to know , and also are afraid of

    speaking to him or her.

    The first step is to smile ; because smile is the language that shows your friendliness.

    In my conclusion, laugh is very impotent to everyone.

    We needed it to enrich our life and is able to live more cheerfully. Moreover, laugh is the way to soothe somebody's heart hurting and show your friendliness.

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