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題目是:The human race has one really effective weapon, and that is laughter 請高手幫我看一下有什麼要改要加強的 或是有標點符號跟文法的使用錯誤 可以的話順便跟我解釋一下 感恩^^ The difference between human and other animals is laugh. This special talent makes people close to each other, and solving the embarrassing problem. Why laughter has such a magic? ... 顯示更多 題目是:The human race has one really effective weapon, and that is laughter
請高手幫我看一下有什麼要改要加強的
或是有標點符號跟文法的使用錯誤
可以的話順便跟我解釋一下
感恩^^

The difference between human and other animals is laugh. This special talent makes people close to each other, and solving the embarrassing problem. Why laughter has such a magic?

We all love to hear and see the joyful things, and laughter is one of the expressions that show the friendly and cheerful. For example, if friend of you failed the exam and you try to soothe him, would you cry with him or just laughing and tell him that it’s not that bad? For me, I choose the second one; because laughing makes people feel positive and able to face the difficulties

Furthermore, if you meet someone you want to know about but afraid to speak to him or her. The first step is to smile and laugh away; because laugh is the language that shows your friendly.

In conclusion, laugh is very impotent for everyone. We needed it to enriched our life and able to live more cheerful. Moreover, laugh is the way to soothe somebody’s hurting heart and show your friendly.
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