cat
Lv 4
cat 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

”急”一首要修改的英文詩 ”20點”

我們老師要我們以自己英文名字的第一個字母為每一行的開頭寫一首介紹自己的詩

想看看有沒有什麼用詞不妥 或是該修改的地方 請大家幫忙看>< 謝謝

my name is Judy

Jovial feeling with me when I arrive the new class

Unlike live is come to me

Deft every difficult things is my goal

young and dream is my property

今晚就要

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已更新項目:

帶著快樂的心情 來到了新班級

不同的生活將要到來

擊敗每個困難是我的目標

青春和夢想是我的財產

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  • yi
    Lv 6
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    my name is Judy

    jovial (joyful) feeling with new class begining

    upright person cus me no cheating (cus是because 的簡寫)

    do the things that's fun and wild

    you will see me all day singing.

    2009-07-29 01:32:37 補充:

    hope this will help ypu.

    2009-07-29 01:36:42 補充:

    幸好妳的名字不叫菊花.(chrysanthemum)

    參考資料: yen
  • 1 0 年前

    go with happieness when I arrive the class

    Unlike(DIFFRENT) live is come to me

    CRASH difficulty is my goal

    young and dream is my property

    2009-07-30 22:33:46 補充:

    第二句打錯

    An Unlike(DIFFRENT)(A whole new life) life is coming to me

  • 1 0 年前

    我建議你先寫成中文

    大家比較好幫你翻

    因為看不太懂你的英文

    2009-07-30 04:08:55 補充:

    I came to this class with(帶著) joyful feeling.

    A different life is ahead of me waiting.(在我前方等著)

    Defeating all the difficulities is my goal. 擊敗

    Youth and dream are my property. Youth 是名詞 年輕

    因為 dream 是名詞 所以年輕也要改成名詞 youth

    youth + dream = 兩個名詞 複數 = are

    希望有幫到你

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