請問這一句英文,對嗎? 需要修正嗎?謝謝喔!

請問這一句英文,對嗎? 需要修正嗎?謝謝喔!

這幅畫描繪,在遼闊的曠野間,群羊低頭安詳吃草,而在畫裏面的右側,有一隻牧羊犬,盡忠職守地面向羊群守護著牠們。

This painting depicts the flock of sheep lower their heads to eat grass
at the broad weald, and on the right side of painting, there is a sheep dog which takes its responsibility to guard them.
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