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請問這下面有問題嗎?是出在哪

I was so embarrassing that i could still remember the details about the moment.

It happened when I was twelve years old at school. While I was delivering a speech on the stage in English, I had the stage fight. I was frozen up that i couldn't say a word. Everyone in the seats stared at me with criticism and had me go away. I almost bursted out crying at the moment. Finally, I walked down the stage disappointedly. It was my first time standing in front of countless people. I did nothing after the speech but blamed myself. By the time I was delivering the speach, I had spent half a year preparing for the day. However, i didn't get the applause but the sneers from the audience.

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    請問這下面有問題嗎?是出在哪

    I was so embarrassed that I could still remember the details about the moment.

    It happened when I was twelve years old at school(no need). While I was delivering a speech in English on the stage, I had the stage fright. I was frozen up that I couldn't say a word. Everyone in the seats stared at me with criticism and had me go away(不懂你是否表示”每個人都叫我停了下來,還是批評你而讓你停下來). I almost bursted out crying at the moment. Finally, I walked down the stage disappointedly. It was my first time standing in front of countless people. I did nothing after the speech but blamed myself. By the time I was delivering the speech, I had spent half a year preparing for the day. However, i didn't get the applause but the sneers from the audiences.

    大致沒錯多少.但有些講法我無法改, 因為一改就改很多. 但可以看的出來您英文有底子, 但是寫法明顯表示出你不是使用英文為母語的外國人,

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