請幫我看一下我的英文對不對

Question

please don't say "forgive me" it's too serious!!!

I just think maybe I can say something to you,

畢竟是我主動跟你交朋友的

但是我又沒辦法插上你們的話題

I often watched your vids on youtube,

and feel you're a cute girl, I like your way!!!

總覺得我們的"方式"很像 (←應該是講"個性"...吧)

So, I 很心急得 want to know you more...

actully, I never think you will reply me, I know you're busy so

much!!我對於喜歡的人事物都會比較心急

I'm sorry, I seem to shocked you!!

But I really hope I can chat with you like friends oneday!!

↑有參雜中文句子的，是我不知道該怎麼翻才好，請幫我翻，用詞不用太難!!謝謝~

下面是中文全文↓

請別說"原諒我" 這太嚴肅了!!!

我只是想要跟你說些甚麼

畢竟是我主動跟你交朋友的

但是我又沒辦法插上你們的話題

我常上youtube看你們的影片

也覺得你很可愛...總覺得我們的"方式"很像

所以我很心急得想認識你!!

其實我沒有想過你會撥空回我信

我知道你很忙...

我對於喜歡的人事物都會比較心急

很抱歉，好像有嚇到你!!!

不過我真的很希望有一天我們也能夠像朋友一樣聊天!!

Answer 1

最佳解答

Please don't say anyhting such as "forgive me." It is not that serious. i jsut want to chat with you. i was the one who started all this "making firined" thing. It is jsut so hard for me to get into you guys topics.

I always go on youtube and watch the video that you guys made. i thought your guys were so cute, and we pretty mcuh like each other. i was trying my best to get to know you. i never thought about you would reply my email ever. i know you are very busy.

i was always impatient to learn the the thing or people i like. i am so sorry. it seems like i had terrified you. Still, i really hope one day, you and me can chat like real friend.

參考資料： myslef

Answer 2

Please don't ask me to forgive you. That's too serious.

All I want is to have a nice talk with you.

After all, it's me who tried to make friends with you first.

But I just don't know how to get into your conversation.

I often watch your video on youtube.

I feel you guys are cute and we share somthing in common.

That's why I am eager to know you more.

It's a pleasant surprise that you spare time for replying me.

I know how busy you are.

我對喜歡的人比較心急 我不太會翻 以下是第三段的改寫

I am sorry if I seem to be a bit blunt to you.

But hopefully, we will talk like close friends someday soon.