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簡單的文法修正!!!!!

Topic:Cartoon

attention-getting opener:Who is Spongebob's best friend?

The answer is....Patrick!

Intro:Hi,everyone.Today I'm going to talk about cartoon.

Body:Many children enjoy watching cartoons because cartoons are very funny.They love lots of cartoon character,like Spongebob,Mickey Mouse,and Mr.Bean.Now,I'm going to talk about Spongebob.

Spongebob is the most popular cartoon now.He is very freaky and laughable.Not only kid,even the adult also watches.His charm gobbles up in the world.Everyone knows him.Now,I'm going to talk about the weaknesses of watch cartoons.

The weaknesses of watch cartoon is a lot of.For example,some children watch cartoons until midnight.That is not good to health.And usually watch TV is not good either to eyes.Now,I'm going to talk about the advantage of watch cartoons.

Cartoons always make people laugh and happy.And it can release stress,too.You can watch cartoons if you are not happy at all.

Concluding:Some of cartoons are good , and some of cartoons are bad.But just don't watch too late,watch cartoons can make you happy every day.

請各位高手幫忙把錯誤的文法挑出來修正

標點符號錯的也要喔!!!!!

謝謝大家了 =)))

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  • Donny
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    1 0 年前
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    Topic: Cartoons

    Attention-getting opener: Who is Spongebob's best friend?

    The answer is....Patrick!

    Intro: Hi, everyone. Today I'm going to talk about cartoons.

    Body: Many children enjoy watching cartoons because cartoons are very funny. They love lots of cartoon character, like Spongebob, Mickey Mouse and Mr. Bean. Now, I'm going to talk about Spongebob.

    Spongebob is the most popular cartoon now. He is very freaky and laughable. Not only kids, but also adults like to watch him. His charm gobbles up the world. Everyone knows him. Now, I'm going to talk about the weaknesses of watching cartoons.

    The weaknesses of watching cartoons is a lot. For example, some children watch cartoons until midnight. That is not good to their health. And usually Watching TV is not good either to eyes. Now, I'm going to talk about the advantage of watching cartoons.

    Cartoons always make people laugh and happy. And it can release stress, too. You can watch cartoons if you are not happy at all.

    Concluding:Some of cartoons are good, but some of them are bad. Just don't watch too late, watching cartoons can make you happy every day.

    建議逗點後面空一格,句點後面空兩格.

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