Ring Ring 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

What's your take on this?

Do you think it is good to ban fires on days when the air is dirty? Why or why not?

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請寫作高手表示一下意見,給我英文版的回應就可以,不需要中文翻譯,謝嘍!

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謝謝各位老師!

因為我和同學目前在密集練習閱讀原文,但對於寫作就不太行...

我目前在廣讀這篇文章=>http://www.cdlponline.org/index.cfm?fuseaction=act...

學英文最好要聽說讀寫並行,目前我們比較弱的是寫作的部份...

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  • 江河
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
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    I think it is important to ban fires on days when the air is dirty. Because the air is dirty can affect the atmosphere of the whole environment, and the fire will go through the air, results in more calamities, such like dust storms, trees fires...etc. So we can not but emphasize the importance and to acclaim the policy which taking into practice.

    The issue is concerned about the environment management, people live in the earth should get well along with the natural. We should notice after burning the fire, don't forget put out it in case of resulting a fire accident.

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  • 1 0 年前

    The sentences are sound in terms of grammer.

    Only one suggestion:

    Replace "when the air is dirty" with "when the air quality is poor".

    It would go like this:

    Do you think it is good to ban fires on days when the air quality is poor? Why or why not?

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  • 1 0 年前

    Do you think it is good to ban fires on days when the air is dirty? Why or why not?

    你認為最好是當空氣骯髒時,禁止日常生火嗎?

    為什麼或為什麼不呢?

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