Write me a english poem

Question

i need somebody write a poem that has Obsesstion, Death, Guilt, Sorrow, Loss, Self-torture in it.

E.g. The poem "The reven"

Answer 1

I am not so good in writing a poen. I can only try my best.

Life becomes self-torture
Everyday
fill with guilt and sorrow
Can't bite the bullet
loss and forever
A lonely me
Obsession with death

2009-10-05 19:09:20 補充：
"Can't bite the bullet" means "can't accept the fact". However, it implies suicide here as well, taking the original meaning out of the box.