加拿大店面承租之商業電子郵件中翻英!

這是封正式的商業電子郵件,懇請知識+網友幫忙中翻英.謝謝!

翻譯信件如下:


XXX你好,

我有興趣承租貴商場Lower Level店面,位於[Below the Belt]右側,原店名為[Play Entertainment],目前已經關閉,不知何時可承租? 尚請問您每月租金為何? 簽約最低年限幾年? 靜待回覆,謝謝.

K.H. Lee
更新: 這封e-mail的主題要叫什麼比較好呢?
更新 2: 請問"哎呀",

主題叫Renting Questions,好嗎?
更新 3: 店面出租回覆信件,英翻中.

Hello! The space is rented for Christmas and we do have a National tenant in negotiations for that space... Nothing is set in stone, but the space is most likely not available.
更新 4: That being said, I can answer some of your questions as additional spaces may come free in the spring and perhaps you'd consider one of those. We Lease space for a year or less, that's my job and its specialty leasing, or 3+ years and that's permanent leasing.
更新 5: Rates change with store sizes and location & depending on the proposed use for the location. Specialty leasing is typically less expensive, but you are not guaranteed the space in contracts a year or less.
更新 6: Can you tell me more of what and when you are thinking? Perhaps I can answer a few more questions!
更新 7: 中翻英(1):
你好,
我目前是xx大學的學生,將於年底畢業. 我來自台灣,畢業後有打算移民來加拿大. 我目前打算加盟American Eagle Outfitters,並於貴mall開業,預估承租時間為三到四年,不知有無什麼建議? 謝謝!

中翻英(2):
你好,
本人有興趣加盟貴公司(American Eagle Outfitters),並於加拿大BC省XX市的Mall開業. 不知貴公司加盟金為何? 請同時告知我其他加盟相關資訊,謝謝.
更新 8: 英翻中:

Something like this is negotiated but our National Leasing team. We love American Eagle Outfitters and we have spoken with them in the past. I am sure there are many qualifications you’d need to prepare – a business plan and financial backing etc.
更新 9: If you want to write up your thoughts and goals, I will pass along your information to our new National Leasing manager (which is soon to be hired, our current one has been promoted) and they will be better able to respond to you!
更新 10: 文中提及,business plan and financial backing (商業計畫 和 財政支援),...我想financial backing明講指的就是"財力證明",那"商業計畫"要怎麼寫啊?

還有write up your thoughts and goals. 我的想法和目標又要怎麼寫啊!? 天阿~ 我最怕寫文章,我很辭窮!
更新 11: 回"哎呀",

其實我最想知道的是我之前問那個出租經理的那間店面每月租金為何,但是你第一次幫我翻譯後,我寄第一封e-mail給那個出租經理,他也沒有給我明確回復說多少錢,他只說"看情況那間店面已經有人要租了." 我是這樣想~,一定要先知道店租每月大概多少,不然超出我的預算,那後面的(商業計畫 和 財政支援)還有(想法和目標)不就白寫了嗎!? 所以我想再問那個出租經理一次,他們Mall裡面的店租,是大概多少錢以上及多少錢以下,讓我知道的大概! 有沒有比較為婉的問法,請幫我再翻譯一下,謝謝!
更新 12: 修正一下~

所以我想再問那個出租經理一次,他們Mall裡面 (三年以上(永久出租)) 的店租,是大概多少錢以上及多少錢以下,讓我知道的大概! 有沒有比較為婉的問法,請幫我再翻譯一下,謝謝!
更新 13: 中翻英(3):

您好,

我已於昨日透過e-mail跟American Eagle Outfitters聯絡,並於今日得到American Eagle Outfitters的回應.
回應內容如下:

XXX


由於American Eagle Outfitters不接受加盟,我是否還有什麼可做的?

謝謝.
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