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Some people believe that fortune has nothing to do with success. When people succeed, it is because of hard work. They hold the idea, as a proverb saying, “no pains, no gains”. They believe that only great efforts lead people to success. Regardless of doing any matter, a person gains success only depend on their efforts. Those who are bet their success on luck and never concentrate on work will definitely end in failure.

In my point of view, I can’t fully agree with this idea that only hard work lead to success. First of all, as a proverb saying,"Man proposes, god disposes”, it is possible that a person with whole-hearted devotion and perseverance also end in failure. Secondly, almost all successful people rely on luck to achieve success. Thirdly, to everyone, luck means chance and plays an important role on the road to success.

In short words, if we want to a success, we must prepare to seize and make the best use of opportunity, then work hard and make efforts. Only in this way can lead us to the summit of success one day.

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    Some people believe that fortune has nothing to do with success. When people succeed, it is because of hard work. They hold the idea, as a proverb saying, "no pains, no gains." They believe that only great efforts lead people to success. Regardless of doing any matter, a person gains success only depend on their efforts. Those who are bet their success on luck and never concentrate on work will definitely end in failure.

    In my point of view, I agree the idea that only hard work lead to success. First of all, as a saying goes"Man proposes, god disposes." It is possible that a person with whole-hearted devotion and perseverance also end in failure. Secondly, almost all successful people rely on luck to achieve success. Thirdly, to everyone, luck means chance and plays an important role on the road to success.

    To sum up, if we want to a success, we must prepare to seize and make the best use of opportunity, then work hard and make efforts. Only in this way can lead us to the summit of success one day.

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