kitty 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

英文文法結構修改!!謝謝

哈瞜各位大大:

這篇文章是how to clean up after a party.

麻煩這位大大幫忙改文法跟整個結構,或是不好的句子改掉也沒關析

謝謝大家!!!

Everyone would like to have a cheerful party.We like to desogn the party ,what is the party topic today?How to decorate the room? We can be different topic and chang different ornaments.Also,we all like to meditate what's the party look like.However,noboby like to clean up after party.It will be the big trouble and terrible thing.Surprisingly,there are several screct solutions and we just fallow these instructions to clean up after that will be easy and swift.

First step,we need to have a large geabage bag that you could empty all the non recyele waste.Otherwise,we need another bag for the rycycle waste like pizza boxes,cans and paper cups.

Next step,to swept and vacuumed the carpet which was spill from the juices and wines.We need to clean as soon as possible that could avoid permanent staining .Also to sweep and wipe all the floor,table and every furniture.

Last step,move and restore the all furniture to the initial place also straight the pictures and that will be done.

In summery,we just fallow those steps that it will be easy and swift way to clean up after a party.However,the most important thing,these should be done on the same day of the party and that will not have slippery and bed smell in the house.

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  • 1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Everyone would like to have a cheerful party. We like to plan for a party, what is the topic that's about party today? How about how to decorate a room? We can be really creative and put up different ornaments.Also,we all like to meditate what's the party look like(meditate是靜坐的意思,請問你想要表達的是?).However, noboby likes to clean up after the party.It will cost you a lot of time and definitely make you tired. Surprisingly,there are several tips and all we gotta to is to fallow these tips, then cleaning up will be easy.

    First,we need to have a large garbage bag that you could put all non-recyclable waste in. Also, we need another bag for recyclable waste like pizza boxes,cans and paper cups.

    Next step,to sweep and vacuum carpet which is spilled with juice and wine. We need to clean up the stain as soon as possible so there is no permanent staining. Also to sweep and wipe all floor,tables and every furniture.

    Eventually, move and restore all furniture to a place that's used to store furnitures, and that will be it.

    We just fallowed these steps that it helps cleaning up after a party much more easy.However,the most important thing is, these should be done on the same day as the party and that will not have wet spots in the house.

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  • chen
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    The cheerful party everyone like ,so that we felt like

    . what the party topic and how about decorating the room

    . can we design smoothly?

    As we can make different and changeable the topic or the ornaments,

    . even though, the party would be meditated look well,but it's

    . clean without nobody up, after the party was past.

    It will be the big trouble and terrible thing.Surprisingly,there are

    .several screct solutions and we just fallow these instructions to clean up

    . after that will be easy and swift.

    First step,we need to have a large garbage bag that

    . you could empty all the non recyele waste.

    . Otherwise,we need another bag for the rycycle waste

    . like pizza boxes,cans and paper cups, and so on.

    Next step,to swept and vacuumed the carpet which was spill from

    . the juices and wines, it was.

    We need to clean such place as soon as possible

    . that could avoid permanent staining .

    .Also to sweep and wipe all the floor,table and every furniture,it is.

    Last step,move and restore the all furniture to

    ..the initial place also straight the pictures and that will be done.

    In summery,we just fallow those above steps

    . that it will be easy and swift way to be cleaned up after a party.

    However,the most important thing,

    . these should be done on the same day of the party

    . and that will not have slippery and bed smells in the house.

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