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Stray Dogs

Today I’ll talk about the problems of stray dogs in Taiwan. In recent years, there were more and more stray dogs occur on the street. Were their stray dogs in the beginning? Of course not! Some of them were discarding of their owner. These dogs became stray dogs and almost have miserable fate, only a few dogs got a new home. Some situations they probably meet of the following reasons.

First, they could catch from the catch dogs group. If nobody adopts them, they will get mercy killing.

Second, some dogs may size to the dog meat shop, and cooked for food.

Finally, car accident is also a serious problem from stray dogs. Lot of dogs died of accident.

We must face up to these problems and solves it. Adopting instead of buying is a great choose. If you have dogs, please take care of them.

以上是我的演講稿內容,請各位英文高手幫個忙,幫我看看文法和句子結構有無問題。

另外我覺得我最後一段寫的有點少,是否還要補充更多呢?

PS. 3分鐘的演講

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  • 楊妞
    Lv 5
    1 0 年前
    最佳解答

    Today I’ll talk about the problems of stray dogs in Taiwan . In recent years, more and more stray dogs appear on the street. Were they stray dogs at the very beginning? Of course not! Some of them were abandoned by their owner. These dogs started to tramp on the street. Only few of them get a new home. Most of them have miserable fate. Because they probably meet the following situations:

    First, they could be caught by the dog-catcher. After that, some of them may luckily be adopted. Otherwise, they will get mercy killed.

    Second, some dogs may be seized and sold to the dog meat shop. Their destination is to be become a dish on the table.

    Finally, car accident is also a deadly weapon to the stray dogs. Lots of dogs have been crashed by cars and become disable, even they survive from the accident. They may face more fierce fights for survival.

    We must face up to these problems and solves them. Adopting instead of buying is a great choose. If you have dogs, please take good care of them and never abandon them until they die.

  • Zippi
    Lv 7
    1 0 年前

    Stray Dogs

    We all know dogs are the most faithful

    animals of man; however, in recent years, more and more stray dogs can be

    seen on the street. Today I’ll talk about the problems of stray dogs in Taiwan. We

    wonder how those stray dogs come from. Well, Some of them were discarded

    by their owners for various reasons. Among those discarded, only

    a few are lucky enough to find a new home by being adopted by good-willed people,

    with most of them suffering from diseases and hunger and struggling for their survivals.

    Their fates are subject to the following causes.

    First, they could be caught anytime by dog-catchers of

    government agencies. If nobody claims or adopts them within a certain period,

    they will get mercy killing or starve to death sometimes.

    Second, some may fall victim to dog meat

    shops and be mercilessly killed for their meat.

    Finally, Lots of dogs may die from car

    accidents while roaming on the street.

    In view of the facts above, we must face and

    tackle these problems in no time In my opinion. Adopting instead of buying is a

    wise policy. If you have dogs, be sure to take good care of them, not leaving

    them in the street Your small efforts will help a great deal to improve the

    fate of stray dogs.

    Thank you.

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    參考資料: me
  • 1 0 年前

    Stray Dogs

    Today I’ll talk about the problem of stray dogs in Taiwan. In recent years,

    there have been more

    and more stray dogs found on the street.

    Were they stray dogs to begin with? Of course not! Some of them were abandoned

    by their owners. These dogs became

    stray dogs and most of them had been unfortunate,

    only a few dogs found new homes. In most cases

    they will encounter the following:

    Firstly, they could be caught by the dog

    catchers. If nobody adopts them, they will be

    put to sleep.

    Secondly, some dogs may size to the dog meat shop, and cooked for food.

    Finally, car accident is also a serious

    problem for stray dogs. A lot of dogs died of accidents.

    We must face up to these problems and resolve them.

    Adopting instead of buying is a great choice.

    If you have dogs, please take care of them.

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