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幫我修改一段文法debate onUS/CAcurrency

請幫我把句子修得順一點或是把ideas make more appealing

謝謝囉 =)

因為有點急...>_<

According to the currency exchange that is usually Americas are many time discussed and it is work on the serious problem.

This performance of a common currency will get a lot of benefit to other countries, not only the United States but also Canada country. This currency movement representative an economic would stabilization of economy, that makes interest rates will be lower than before. Furthermore lower long-term interest rates risk will be less than before from countries with a common currency. This best solution could make new hard currency, it shows on stock market will be growing up. Thus, these benefits will more valuable life for countries.

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  • 1 0 年前
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    因為有點難理解原意是要表達什麼,所以我僅修改了一下文法。

    According to the currency exchange issue which America has discussed many times, it is really a serious problem. The performance of a common currency will get a great benefit for other countries, not only for the United States but also for Canada. This currency movement shows the stabilization of economy,which also makes interest rates lower than before. Furthermore,in countries which have a common currency, lower long-term interest rate risk is even less than before. The best way to solve the problem is to make new hard currency,and it is going to grow up in the stock market. Thus,the benefit will be more valuable for the countries.

    參考資料: 我在美國學習的個人經驗
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  • 1 0 年前

    ok....我了解你說的,以下是你的版本

    和改正的

    第一,句子不順,文法錯誤

    According to the currency exchange that is usually Americas are many time discussed and it is work on the serious problem.

    應改成

    America discussed about the currency exchange for many times and is working on the serious problem now.

    你的,文法錯誤 get a lot of 是複數形式,所有後面的benifit 應加 s

    This performance of a common currency will get a lot of benefit to other countries, not only the United States but also Canada country.

    這邊感覺起來不簡潔俐落

    這段可改成

    This performance of the common currency will get a lot of benifts to other countries like United States and Canada at that time.

    or

    This performance of the common currency will benifits many countries.Such as Canada and United States at that moment.

    .

    or

    This performance of the common currency will benifits to the countries like Canada and United States at that period of time

    .

    其實還可以改變成很多句子,字數限制,所以只列出三個

    如果你是要特別指出某一個特殊情況,人物,地點<國家在那名辭前可並須加 the

    你的句子 文法錯/句子詞不達義<confusing sentence

    This currency movement representative an economic would stabilization of economy, that makes interest rates will be lower than before.

    應改成

    This currency movement representst the enconomic's stability of the world that makes interst rates go much lower than before.

    你的句子 忘了句號 混亂句子confusing sentence

    Furthermore lower long-term interest rates risk will be less than before from countries with a common currency.

    Change to

    Furthermore,it's would lower the long-term interest rates risk with a common currency in a country.

    or

    Furthermore,it's will make the long-term interst rates become lower than before if have a common currency in many countries.

    複數形式加S

    你的句子 grammer problems 文法錯誤

    This best solution could make new hard currency, it shows on stock market will be growing up. Thus, these benefits will more valuable life for countries

    改成這樣會更好

    This best solution could turn that into a new strong currency.It will shows on stock market that appear going up.Thus,These benifits will make many countries have a more valuable life than before.

    有不懂的問題都 可以寄信來問,我會依依解答

    參考資料: 在國外讀書的我
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