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J.K EVAn 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 1 0 年前

請幫忙check一下文法。感謝。

I went to Hong Kong for three years ago. It was my first time in Hong Kong , so I was so excited. Hong Kong was not only an extremely beautiful city but also a shopping paradise. Although I have gone to Hong Kong twice, I liked to go to there still. There were many big shopping mall and night markets. For example , Harbour City、Time Square and Park Lane were famous shopping mall in Hong Kong and most of the brand-addicted man went to there to buy things. By the way, I taught you that I brought a Tiffany’s ring to my girlfriend . I spelt $650 on that ring. Such a sad things for me.

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    went to Hong Kong three years ago. It was my first time in Hong

    Kong , so I was so excited. Hong Kong was not only an extremely

    beautiful city but also a shopping paradise. Although I have been to

    Hong Kong twice, I still liked to go there. There were many big shopping malls and night markets. For example , Harbour City、Time

    Square and Park Lane were famous shopping malls in Hong Kong. Some men who were addicted to name brand things liked to shop there, too. By the way, I told you that I brought a Tiffany ring to my girlfriend . I spent

    $650 on that ring. It was a sad thing to me.

    2009-12-19 15:15:32 補充:

    thanks Jerry, I missed that one.

    參考資料: A Taiwanese living in the US
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